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Thu Jun 29, 2017 9:30 pm
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SacredPen says...



Thanks! I'll be sure to read up!
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Fri Jun 30, 2017 10:53 am
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Turns on Fresh Prince Intro

Now this is a story all about how my trip got turned right upside down
So just give me one second
And sit down sage
I'll tell you how I became the undisputed king of party games

In Copenhagen is where this story had begun
I had just boarded a cruise, I was ready for fun
I was ready to drink, I was ready to sin
And party all week with my new found friends
When a couple of girls who just wanted to dance
Popped, dropped, and locked it, they were shaking their a**
I did a half dozen shots, and we all got lit
We said "we are going all night, we don't give a s**t"

We partied like this day after day
Till some kid said "yo we should play party games"
This kid said he was the best
I told him he was wrong
So he challenged me to a game of beer pong

I beat this kid bad, but he thought he was clever
He said "let's play a game of never have I ever"
I shook my head cause this kid thought he was bad
But I had done things that just made him look sad
This kid got pissed, said he wasn't that soft
So the next game we played was "what are the odds"

Now, I don't remember the rest cause I had a whole lot to drink
But when I woke up that morning I didn't know what to think
I had a hicke on my neck and mustard on my shirt
I had a bump on my head that was starting to hurt
But this kid had to admit it
He said "Dude, you're insane"

That's how I became the undisputed king of party games
This is the Rule of Three
Every writer's most sacred oath
Two boys to challenge each other
One girl to challenge them both

-Jim
  





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Fri Jun 30, 2017 10:56 am
sheysse says...



Welcome back! I guarantee you we're a lot less interesting!
  





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Fri Jun 30, 2017 11:21 am
jimss23 says...



I'm back for now! I'll still be a bit spotty but in 3 days I'll be back full time
This is the Rule of Three
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Two boys to challenge each other
One girl to challenge them both

-Jim
  





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Fri Jun 30, 2017 12:28 pm
LordZeus says...



Hey guys sorry I haven't posted in a while but I'm not sure what to write. Could someone please mention Devon in their post? That would help me a lot.
  





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Fri Jun 30, 2017 5:53 pm
Shota says...



@LordZeus I think @Tortwag is working on a post right now and depending on what he does I would gladly try to write something with Devon after he is done with it! Because I am bored and need something to do once the weekend hits
  





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Fri Jun 30, 2017 7:08 pm
TinkerTwaggy says...



@Sheyren I disagree! We're... Interesting in different ways :3

@jimss23 Welcome back, DM! Your preence had been missed <3

@Shota I am indeed preparing a post, though Devon wasn't planned to be a clear part of it. But, I can totally end our lil' discussion with a setup for Quez to talk with Devon, that way, that could happen too.

@LordZeus If you're having a bad case of writer's block, we can always brainstorm the next bit here on DT! I recall Jimmy talking about an encounter between Devon and Sullivan, however, so, maybe that should be something you should start planning for too.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Fri Jun 30, 2017 7:12 pm
Terian805 says...



So a quick thought, this meal is happening at sundown right? So everyone will eventually being going to bed, and then the next day there'll be the entrance exam?
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Fri Jun 30, 2017 7:19 pm
TinkerTwaggy says...



Good question. To me we're more like in the beginning of the afternoon, the meal takes around 1:30 to 2 hours to finish, so by around like 14:00 the entrance exam begins and lasts for the rest of the day. *I believe our bossman will have to clarify this one!*
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Fri Jun 30, 2017 9:25 pm
jimss23 says...



I am working from a phone right now and the internet is spotty so I will try to catch up on the posts and let you all know what the plan will be. Come around July 4th (Go America) I will post what is happening in the exams.

However, I can say that the meal should be a dinner followed the exams the next day. It will make more sense when I post how the exam works.
This is the Rule of Three
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Two boys to challenge each other
One girl to challenge them both

-Jim
  





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Fri Jun 30, 2017 9:30 pm
TinkerTwaggy says...



@jimss23 Gotcha! See you on the 4th, then.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Sat Jul 01, 2017 6:37 pm
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Alright. Caught up on reading. From what I gathered everyone is currently eating and doing a little meet and greet. I can include Sullivan when I get back or someone can bump him, either way.

Looking forward to getting back to writing!

Cheers,

Jimmy
This is the Rule of Three
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Two boys to challenge each other
One girl to challenge them both

-Jim
  





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Sat Jul 01, 2017 11:32 pm
SacredPen says...



I'll post once I get approved, if I haven't already.

You guys are infinitely better at this than me, heh.
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Sat Jul 01, 2017 11:37 pm
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Shota says...



@SacredPen I am sure you will do wonderful! Plus we don't get better without practice!
  





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Sun Jul 02, 2017 9:11 am
TinkerTwaggy says...



@SacredPen I mean, some of us have been doing SBs for a few years, now, and you're currently the newest face to come join us, so don't worry - not only does it goes without saying, you won't have any trouble left once you get used to it.
Like Shota said: practice :3 That's also what we're here to help ya for.

Okay, ONE THING that makes me laugh cynically because I studied the middle ages:

"[...]He has a fondness for female clothing, which is more breathable and unrestricted[...]"
...He's lucky we're in a fantasy world that's not the Middle Ages up to the 1800s. Because women's clothing stayed everything BUT comfy for several centuries XD *hmm, but then that realization could've made for quite the character development... anyways*

And a last thing: So Zhoma (because that's his first name, and I'mma call you Sacred instead) fights exactly like an animal. Just wanted to ask which animal specifically - I assume lion, but y'know, every species basically figths in different ways, and even among the same species not all the members have the same hunting/killing techniques depending on the clan, so, just wondered exactly which you were going for.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  








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