@HazelGrace16 what's the idea? Or do you want to surprise us?
Speaking of ideas, I have one. I'll put it up here, just tell me if it messes up anything or ask any questions if you have any. So, I was thinking, Kir's character at this point could go two ways. She could continue on the straight and narrow, or, starting with her battle with Astral, start to travel down a darker, more...bloodstained...sideroad. The development would be gradual, no one would really notice the change until they see her brutally kill someone. (Ying, perhaps? If it's alright with @TheForgottenKing) But once she starts seeing what she's becoming, she gets really scared and confused, which will result in her and Leon running off and going back into hiding for a little while, trying to live a life like normal teens. (Going to school, getting jobs ect.) Their running off would be Post-Dream-World, So (1) Blak would have his own form and Leon would be free, and (2) It would be one of the most confusing and emotionally straining time for Kirsten, where she isn't sure of she really knows who she is or where she belongs.
The others eventually find them and convince both of them that they need to come back, Scar and Carlos help Kirsten sort of find herself again, which draws her closer than ever to her friends and ultimately makes her stranger and helps her realize, like Astral, that being superhuman doesn't mean you have to forsake the "Human" part. In other words, strength isn't numbness.
I like it. My idea will basically give the team a lead on where Scarlette is. @TheFantasy you and Carlos will take this on. You'll find the bunker, and split up. One to find Scar. The other to find Astral. (Another moment where people will realize being alone is stupid.) Kirsten can have her fight with Astral, and Scar will come in stopping her from killing him. At this point Astral doesn't want to kill, but he also needs to protect himself. If that's okay @Chaser. This will show her new power to Kir as well as answer a lot of questions. After the questions are answered Carlos will come in see Scarlette and they'll have a "You're not dead!" Moment. I don't care who writes the battle, but I would like the post that answers the question. @Lau2001 you can do the "Yay you're not dead post." after mine. Sound good?
"Sometimes it is the people who no one imagines anything of who do the things that no one can imagine" - The Imitation Game
It sounds good. But in order for the Dream-World arc to happen, Leon needs to be present. What'll he be doing as Kirsten and Carly save Scarlette? As for something else, we should probably be brainstorming why Kirsten would kill in the first place. Ying's been hinted to be "unstable," so maybe he'll try to kill Astral or Leon? If it's a different character, maybe it could be a corrupt government official (or something ).
On a different note, where are Tybalt and Matthew headed? I'd assumed they were going to find Ying, but neither of them have posted in a while.
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Ying is kinda Matts endgame, and I was thinking that he would hold Blaks form a little bit. For example, in The last Olympian, How Lukes body was just a stepping stone for Kronos, I was thinking Ying could be a stepping stone to Blaks ultimate form.
@Chaser@HazelGrace16 I think I'll do the post on the fight with Astral if that's okay with you. If you want Chase, you can to your POV after but Fight Scenes are one of my favorite things to write (And one of the things I need to work on..)
Sounds good! Oh and @Chaser, If Kirsten tries her "Light Speed Fight" Technique again, here's the fatal flaw you use to beat it. You can see her at the moment of impact.
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