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Wed Oct 28, 2015 4:38 am
Chaser says...



I couldn't wait. I've posted again.
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Wed Oct 28, 2015 8:19 am
Snoops says...



@TheFantasy14 want me to keep going with the chapter? You could PM me what's in the file or if its easier you can just do it. Whatever works best.
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Wed Oct 28, 2015 1:58 pm
Europa says...



Alright, I'll do that @Lau2001
  





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Wed Oct 28, 2015 9:29 pm
Europa says...



@Chaser could we possibly meet to plan out the combat scene with Kir and Astral? Reading your recent post, I'm thinking I might need to change a few things so I wanted to check and see if what I have planned will still go along with what your planning on doing with Astral's character if that makes sense.
  





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Wed Oct 28, 2015 9:56 pm
HazelGrace16 says...



It honestly still could happen. After me and Chaser do the time skip you could find the bunker and start a fight with him. He is somewhat trying to explain, but you don't listen. Then Scar could come in and tell her to stop.

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Wed Oct 28, 2015 9:57 pm
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I have one more post I need to do before our time skip @Chaser Let me know if you have anymore
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Wed Oct 28, 2015 10:03 pm
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I'm good. I'm just glad you're alright with my post.
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Wed Oct 28, 2015 10:05 pm
Europa says...



okay. alright then, good. I wanted a chance for Kir to use some big magic, kind of use this fight to have readers see her in a new light, but I can do that when they confront Blak later on.
  





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Wed Oct 28, 2015 10:11 pm
HazelGrace16 says...



I loved it! Why did you think I wouldn't? @Chaser
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Thu Oct 29, 2015 3:10 am
Europa says...



I've posted! Kirsten wears a glove on her left hand after this. (Pretty epic fight scene in this one!)
  





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Thu Oct 29, 2015 8:46 pm
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What way are we heading with the plot now? And are we close too rescuing Scar?
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Thu Oct 29, 2015 9:37 pm
HazelGrace16 says...



Hey I have an idea Fanty before we do the time skip to saving Scar. I will pm you soon!! @TheFantasy14
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Fri Oct 30, 2015 2:19 am
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That sounds like a good idea,@HazelGrace16. Let's do that!
  





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Fri Oct 30, 2015 4:55 am
HazelGrace16 says...



Time jump is here!
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Fri Oct 30, 2015 9:52 pm
Europa says...



Posted. (Sorry, too excited to wait! :D)
  








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