Young Writers Society

Sameee ^ Go ahead and make an antagonist. There are a lot of OP people here... are they gonna spar at any point @TheRealEuphoria?

So @TheRealEuphoria, you’re up next for Rosetta, correct? : D

So I’m not the greatest artist but I was feeling particularly inspired and decided to try my hand at Aiden and Catherine just to get their images in my system and this is what I came up with. The image is a little blurry because I scanned it to my phone and then had to compress it for it to be small enough to send but yeah. : D

Edit: I also just realized that everyone in the cast that has a height listed is short except Aiden. I put it in a comparing heights simulator for the characters that had heights listed in their descriptions, and Aiden is a head taller than ALL OF THEM. (He will definitely be using this for intimidation purposes lol)

For some reason this line reminds me of Aiden:

Outrunning karma, that boy
He's such a charmer

Ooh I love that! It does give off Aiden vibes.

Hey, @TheRealEuphoria? You up for next post? This is your storybook, after all...

I just think they haven’t been online in a few days : ) life gets busy, and sometimes work and school get in the way of checking things. I’m sure they’ll be online soon and decide if they’ll go next or not.

Hmm... it’s been a little over 2 weeks since they’ve responded to anything... hope they’re doing alright. But we can’t exactly have someone else post yet since it’s alphabetical and because of that Rosetta is supposed to go next.

Why don't we do something to postpone it? Like a sudden accident?

Hmm... that’s possible but this is also going to be the easiest way for all the characters to get introduced to each other and each other’s powers. It would be possible for Aiden to suddenly cause Rosetta to feel too weak to present as a message that they shouldn’t have declined his offer to go exploring with him. I’m sure there could also be another way to have Rosetta not present and just skip to the next person after her alphabetically.

this is unrelated to the get-rosetta-temporarily-out-of-the-picture thing but i really want a rivalry between cloud and aiden that probably will cause a lot of . . . "disorder in the order"

Yes that would certainly be interesting. With that in mind does Cloud’s behavior in my previous post still make sense? At least, his interaction with Aiden? I can’t remember if you looked over it and said it was good and I thought you did, but just to clarify.

oh yeah i like it! I thought you may have made cloud a little too assertive, but it wasn't too big of a deal. cloud is usually one who doesn't attract attention

also i thought that cloud would be a good rival for aiden because cloud can counter most of what aiden's got. since cloud has spacial manipulation, he can prevent aiden from touching him AND if aiden does touch him and say, give him a heart attack, cloud will just speed up the pace of his heart or something

Yes, they definitely could be good rivals! I can also see Aiden attempting to get him on his side, and whether or not Cloud went for that would be up to you. Aiden is motivated by power and influence and he’d see working with Cloud as an opportunity to obtain that. I don’t know how Cloud would react to ideas like that though. It’s also interesting because Cloud is one of the only people who can combat Aiden’s power. Even Amelia can’t really— she can stop him but if he’s already placed a tumor in someone, it’s there. It’s just under his power how fast it moves. If he’s already inserted it into someone’s body, then he could just leave it there and let it build over the years, so Cloud really is one of the only people who could fully reverse something Aiden does.

So what's the plan about how to get-rosetta-temporarily-out-of-the-picture thing