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Wed Aug 12, 2020 11:16 pm
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Hiii!! https://omnom.writerfeedpad.com/549 here's the pad!! I'll be in here whenever im on yws and I'll be writing my next post here
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And posted! I think we leveled up and I'll work on updating the tome soon, but for now, I'd like to start a bit of a posting order! Now that everyone is together, I'm going to put a co-writer to every post. It is up to you if you want to collab or not, but I highly recommend collaboration!! :D I'm also going to put a bit of a guide to the post of what I'd like to see in the post to push the plot along. Other than that, you have free reign over your post :D

  • @Chaser
    • Co-written with @soundofmind
      The group checks out Serion for survivors. They find evidence of mafia and Synua guards there. At the end of the post, they find the little girl and her cat from before.
  • @ScarlettFire
    • Co-written with @soundofmind
      The group take care of the girl, but she has too severe a case of bluecough to survive. They do what they can to save Serion, but it's too late for the town as well. At the end of the post, Belxibis separates with the group to try and ride through the night to Nua Port.
  • @AlyTheBookworm
    • Co-Written with @Chaser
      The group promises Bel that they will hunt down the people who did this to Serion, and after a few dead ends, they find a hideout of a group of Mafia people who have been ostracized from Syna because they contracted bluecough while they were burning down Serion. The group splits. Railyn and Tyri head to the cave, only to find everyone brutally murdered and Belxibis in the middle of them.
  • @soundofmind
    • Co-written with @Omnom
      Bel's journey with the girl while she is dying. He doesn't make it to Nua, but finds the mafia. His journey until it catches up with Railyn and Tyri.

All right! And that's everyone. Let me know what you think of this posting order :D
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Tue Aug 18, 2020 7:48 am
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soundofmind says...



i finally read that post and i am sad!!!!!!!!! but IT WAS A GOOD POST
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Wed Aug 19, 2020 4:38 am
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Posted for Paimon. The first page is very long now
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Wed Aug 19, 2020 4:43 am
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Clues acquired - for epic detective moments

Burned scrap of fabric - This innocuous brown piece of fabric found by Ivern is in fact a smuggler's symbol, as Bel would be able to tell you. When exposed to certain chemicals, or a chemical change from being burned, it reveals the crest upon it. Bel will be able to link this crest to the powerful Idora mafia.

Bird tracks - The bird tracks found by Railyn loop around to the main road. Could the Synua guards have done this? Or was it a renegade act by their bird steeds?
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Wed Aug 19, 2020 5:07 am
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@Chaser that post was SO TENSE. Like, you know just how to create a sense of urgency with how you write, and I was on the edge of my seat the entire time. It's honestly breathtaking, bravo! And, boy, that ending. This next post or two is gonna be a rough read, beginning to end, I can already feel it
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@Omnom The secret is mentioning every third sentence that they're in a fire.
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Wed Aug 19, 2020 5:37 am
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soundofmind says...



Honestly, that sounds like a really good strategy. I buy it
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Wed Aug 19, 2020 6:00 am
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ScarlettFire says...



OOOF, that was so so good. Both @Omnom and @Chaser's posts. I FINALLY CAUGHT UP. And it has inspired me to write for Eli, so Eli post comin' right up!!

Also, oooh, CLUES.

And lol, good secret strategy!
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Wed Aug 19, 2020 8:09 pm
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Hey everyone, make sure to start putting the timeline on your posts! Including any time there's a time skip that'll push it to the next day. I've added it to all posts right now, including the ones in the pad :D
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Wed Aug 19, 2020 9:55 pm
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Another note is that B.N.D. is Before (something) so we're counting down to an event. So each day that passes will count down.
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Thu Aug 20, 2020 5:43 am
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LOVE HOW THERE'S A BIG OMINOUS EVENT ON THE HORIZON!!! DOESN'T FILL ME WITH DREAD FILLED ANTICIPATION AT ALL!!!!!! IM NOT NERVOUS!!!! DON'T KNOW WHY YOU'D THINK THAT!!!!
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Sat Aug 22, 2020 6:12 pm
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Mageheart says...



Hi! Just popping in quickly again to congratulate you all on reaching the second page of this storybook! :)

I keep being blown away by how many posts you've been churning out this month. <3
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Sun Aug 23, 2020 4:40 am
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@Magebird you gotta read the story, it's so good! im biased, but shhhh
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I agree! Read it, please. We really enjoy writing our posts!
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