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These are all lovely to read, but am especially loving your eclipse poem having just watched the eclipse! "pre-dawn pilgrimage" and 'holy communion around telescopes' are such fantastic descriptors of the religiosity with which people follow the stars.
Also I LOVED how you opened and closed poem 3 - such a strong poem, full of emotion and turns and then just when I thought it was ending on one note, you add in that last line
Perfect use of white space and line breaks!
Enjoying following along, and looking forward to reading more! <3 Always a pleasure to read your poetry.
Also I LOVED how you opened and closed poem 3 - such a strong poem, full of emotion and turns and then just when I thought it was ending on one note, you add in that last line
I have the luxury of
ending this poem and
walking away.
.
.
.
But I won’t.
Perfect use of white space and line breaks!
Enjoying following along, and looking forward to reading more! <3 Always a pleasure to read your poetry.
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