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Thu Feb 09, 2012 2:12 am
Kit says...



HOUSE RULES

1) If I think you are capable of greater things, I will be strict.
2) I will never have a wishywashy opinion, you will never get a one sentence "that's nice" kind of thing.
3) If I feel your work is especially raw, brave or honest, I will encourage you. If you pull your punches, I will call you on it.
4) I may review it in pentameter, because I enjoy doing that.
5) Poetry, lyrics and short stories preferred but not required
6) Occasionally I will take a while, I do have to play harp for many hours of the day.


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Fri Feb 10, 2012 4:52 pm
tanya98 says...



Hi! please review my work! really need it ! Here it is :
work.php?id=93325
Thank-you !
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Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:50 am
Kit says...



Done and done. Hope your teacher likes it.
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Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:26 pm
canislupis says...



Hello!

I need some help with this poem: work.php?id=93355

Caveat: I've always written prose and have literally no idea what I'm doing with poetry. Anything you notice would be helpful, and don't be afraid to rip it to shreds. ;) Also, I'd be happy to review something of yours in return, and though I can't guarantee I'll have a coherent opinion on poetry, I can try. I could definitely review any prose you have. Anyway, thanks in advance!
  





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Sun Feb 12, 2012 11:13 pm
Kit says...



Doooooone. Twas good, didn't need mauling, just a graze or two.
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Tue Feb 14, 2012 3:17 am
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work.php?id=93404

That please! Thank you very much. [:
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Wed Feb 15, 2012 11:10 pm
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Please shred and rip and be cruel. Thank you!
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Wed Feb 15, 2012 11:58 pm
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work.php?id=93452

Greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance.
Dane
  





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Fri Feb 17, 2012 12:54 am
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Sorry, I have been without interwebs. Jas, yours is done, just getting through Twit's and Dane's now.
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Fri Feb 17, 2012 4:08 am
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Twit's done. Have to keep reading that one, good story..
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Sat Feb 18, 2012 12:47 am
Jas says...



work.php?id=93230

I'd love a review as well! :]
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Sat Feb 18, 2012 6:54 am
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Dane is done, getting to you guys this afternoon.
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Fri Feb 24, 2012 2:20 am
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Ahhhsmusch is done. So sorry about the wait. Jas' is almost done.
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Fri Feb 24, 2012 3:05 am
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Jas is done :)
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