I've got an ongoing novel that can always use some feedback to be spruced up. While it's not a finished piece, it is on chapter 15 - they're all quite lengthy, too. With that in mind, I fully understand that you'd be tackling this at your leisure.
If you're willing, here's the link to the prologue and first chapter (mistakenly uploaded together because I was a babby YWS user at the time!):
Do I need to provide a link to the following chapters, too?
If you want me to follow the whole novel, just the link to the first installment is fine! I'll try to get through this in a timely manner, thanks so much!
@Lightsong, I'll get right to it once I get a few novel reviews done! It shouldn't be more than a day or two ^^
And thank you @soundofmind@Morrigan so so much for your patience! I got really sick right after I re-opened this, so I wasn't able to get anything done until today. @Costa, I'll be getting to your novel next, probably get the first review done today and then maybe one a day after that until I'm all caught up!
Anyone else who wants to request: Go ahead! I don't have any cap this time!
Could you please focus on characterisation, dialogue, plot and flow? Please dont be too harsh as well, but not too soft at the same time, if thats possible. Thanks in advance!
Please review God's Assassin ★ 5! It's the fifth part, so if you need a better understanding of the story, you can start reading it from the first part. Thank you!
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.
The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."
It's a fairy tale retelling of Red Riding Hood that I wrote a couple years ago and I'm looking to revamp it and possibly turn it into a novel or novella.
"A poet is, before anything else, a person who is passionately in love with language." - W.H. Auden
RULES UPDATED: I am only taking 1 request at a time.
All previous requests have been wiped as they're almost a year old.
I'll respond when the review has been completed! Please wait for me to respond to the last review before submitting your request.
Please do not request a review more than twice in a row, to give others a fair chance too.
I will not review works with more than 4 reviews already or which are older than 6 months. Exceptions may apply.
I will not follow novels or multi part short stories in my WRFF for the time being. I will review one chapter or part at a time. Thank you for your understanding.
I reserve the right to refuse to review a piece based on my personal beliefs. This will be rare and far between but I have to say it so no one is ever surprised.
I am still harsh. I can still be nice. Promise. Tell me which you'd prefer when requesting.
Gender:
Points: 50
Reviews: 425