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Thu Apr 14, 2011 2:20 pm
ehte92 says...



Hello there. Lily.

Could you review this poem for me?

I would be really very grateful. :smt003

Thank you. You are awesome. :D
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Sat Apr 16, 2011 12:55 am
lilymoore says...



Doneskies!!!
Who's next!?
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
  





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Mon Apr 18, 2011 9:55 pm
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matthewmazer says...



think you could review my stuff?
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Wed Apr 20, 2011 11:49 pm
Boolovesyou says...



Hey I just wrote this weird story. Its short but on dark side, and I've never written anything like this before. If you review it, it would be great. Heres the link:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post850247.html#p850247
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Thu Apr 21, 2011 1:20 am
MandaPanda1031 says...



You should review my novel. I'm going to post Chapter 1, because in order to understand chapter 2, you need chapter 1 but I want you to review chapter 2

viewtopic.php?t=79638
  





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Sat Apr 23, 2011 4:01 am
lilymoore says...



Boom! Done!! And I have a very long weekend ahead of me with nothing to do so some requests would be amazing!!!
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
  





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Sun Apr 24, 2011 6:58 pm
pinkangel54123 says...



This is the first chapter of my novel. It is fantasy, and I would be very happy if you reviewed it. Thanks in advance.
Want a heavenly review?

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Mon Apr 25, 2011 8:15 pm
UnicornNerd says...



Please read my novel, the shift. It science fiction. You can find it on my portfolio. Kthnxbai! :)
  





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Wed Apr 27, 2011 4:25 am
HostofHorus says...



Lilly! I am here to request a review! (of course....) Would you be willing to read my poem? I would be very grateful!

topic79975.html
HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
http://JRSStories.com
Stories Poems © As of January 1st 2014

Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)
  





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Sun May 01, 2011 5:01 pm
lilymoore says...



Whoooah! Done!
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Sat Jun 11, 2011 12:03 am
Explosive_Pen says...



Lily!
Could I bug you for a review on this? topic82203.html
Thanks so much if you get around to it<5
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Fri Jun 17, 2011 8:52 pm
lilymoore says...



Done!
I maybe without a permanent house but I do have internet which is more than I expected but since my boyfriend works in the mornings, I figure, what better way to spend the mornings then reviewing...so please, request!
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Fri Jun 17, 2011 9:34 pm
peanut19 says...



I know you haven't read the rest but maybe just do the grammar part? I'll love you forever, Lil(: topic82394.html

Please, and thank you<3

~peanut~
There is a light in you, a Vision in the making with sorrow enough to extinguish the stars. I can help you.
~And The Light Fades


The people down here are our zombies, who should be dead or not exist but do.
~Away From What We Started


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Fri Jun 17, 2011 10:35 pm
kjr5horses says...



Hey do you mind reviewing my two contest entries?

They are in my portfolio.

They are called, 1.Far Away... and 2. Last Chance...

Thanks!

KJR
"Me I'm dishonest but a dishonest man you can always trust to be dishonest. Honestly its the honest ones you have to watch out for because you can never tell when they are going to do something incredibly...stupid." ~Capt. Jack Sparrow
  





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Fri Jun 17, 2011 11:31 pm
IIWickedDestinyII says...



Can you review my romance ficton please?
viewtopic.php?t=82625

or my fantasy?
viewtopic.php?t=82726
One word to say to you
One world to live onto
One person that makes you spin
One song you'll always sing
Show me the way <3
  








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