Hiya! I was wondering whether - when you have time - you could review the first part of my fantasy novel, White Eyes. The link is here: viewtopic.php?t=69991 But it's quite a long chapter, so if you don't want to review it that's absolutely fine. Of course, I'd like it if you did, but no pressure God bless, Ignis
The POTATO of DOOM
A thousand times it calls your name A thousand times you hear it And fools are those who heed its call But fools are those who fear it.
post786472.html#p786472 This scene is very short, but it's very important in my novel because it's the reason of my protagonist's misery. Thank you, Shub ^^
I'm back to my YWS after months of disappearance, hoping that I'd gain the immunity of books and quills against the harmful realism of our world.
In case this made no sense, I'm just saying that I'm happy I'm back!
Heyy Shubs, this will be my first post since October 15th and my first work posted up since August (which was just a drawing). Here is the link: The Silver Lining (chapter one)
Thanks so much, it needs a lot of work!
Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.
Gender:
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