This is general fiction. It's just a short intro to a novel I'm working on. I just want to know if it's too heavy/ too much description...that kinda' thing.
Skinsy! May I request a review from you? It's fantasy fiction. A small prologue... I would really appreciate your opinion on it. Little Macey. Thank you! (:
Your = Possession. Your shoes are so sweet! You're = Omission. You're quite strange...
If you are confused about which to put, simply say in your mind "you are" and see if that fits the sentence. If not, you are looking for your.
You've read this piece before, but I've really worked hard over it, and so here it is. I don't need the chapter 1.2 reviewed, but if you want to, I don't mind!
Would just like to say you're fantastic and the efforts you go to do keep up to date with your WRFF thread is astounding and an example of excellence to us all would-be reviewers
Keep up the awesome work.
Spoiler! :
(you are as radically unusual and cool as this image)
Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long. Here is a link.... topic77210.html Thanks a lot! Really appreciate it! -Jojo
So because your such an amazing reviewer, would you want to review my latest piece? It is a short story posted in general fiction. If you decide to take the order, feel free to rip it to shreds! Thanks!
Also, I'm going away for a few days, so I wont' be able to do any reviews. Because of that, I'd avoid asking me for any really. Once I'm back though, I shall open this again.
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
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