Hai! I really need help with improving myshort story (predominantly with how I express the piece), please. I'd be honoured to return the favour if you ever want a review from me
Thank you very much
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I'd like an overall review, but could you point out any grammar/spelling mistakes if you see them please? There shouldn't be any, I try to conduct pretty severe spell/grammar checks on all my work, but yeah. If you see any, please point them out
Thanks 'Pyre
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed Made soft with all her razor blades, That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked. As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades
I've been bogged down with a lot of reviews, so I'll get to you other guys's reviews as soon as possible. Hopefully, I'll be able to get a few done by the end of the night!
Hey Skins! I was wondering if you could trouble yourself to review my romantic short story: 'Almost'. I have plans to try submitting it to either a few contests on here or to magazines (EEK!), any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Here's the link:
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