It's the latest chapter in TSBI and I'd really like your feedback. Thanks!
~Jas
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
hello! I've been looking through the forums and your reviews are popping up everywhere! I would love love love if you could possibly critique my poem? I'm new to YWS, but am having so much fun, already! I've always enjoyed writing poetry/short stories, but now I have a place to become a better writer and improve my prose. I'd adore some good feedback!!!
Hey Lauren:) Could I ask you for a review of my novel? I am still in the process of writing it, so for now, I only have 4 chapters (but there are deifinitely more to come)! It's a fantasy story. But I won't ruin it for you:D Here it is: novel.php?id=1934 Thanks in advance! polly xx
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." - Dr. Seuss
I'm currently competing in NaNoWriMo, but will get to any requested reviews as soon as I have time (though it may be a tad longer than usual for me to get time to review).
I know you're good with novel intros and fantasy stuff, so I thought I'd ask you for a review of a fantasy prologue for me. When you get the chance, could you please check out this for me?
It's pretty ew at the moment, to be honest, but hopefully you'll be able to fix that. >.<
Would you mind reviewing my novella? Ghost of Theater Two? Prolouge: viewtopic.php?t=90746 Chapter one: viewtopic.php?t=90955 I haven't had time to post the next chapters yet. Thanks so much! ~Berlynn Rae
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