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Sat Nov 27, 2010 6:10 pm
LadySpark says...



hey shear! will you please review my poem Mask? viewtopic.php?t=70962
thanks!
~pointe
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Mon Nov 29, 2010 3:49 pm
Shearwater says...



Ziggie-Done!
Pointe-Done!

Can I has some moar requests, please? :3
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Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:45 pm
Meep(: says...



Whoa, you're in great demand o_o

Would you please review this short piece for me? I normally don't use this forum but there's not been much help given to me on how to improve xD

I'd be glad to return the favour if you want a review from me! I can't do poetry though :D

A big thank you to you! :)
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Thu Dec 02, 2010 10:29 pm
foreveralone says...



Hello :D Can you please review my poem "abducted" ? Thank you :D
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Fri Dec 03, 2010 1:03 am
Shearwater says...



Meep-Done!
Foreveralone-Done!

Feed me.
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Sat Dec 04, 2010 3:41 am
Gladius says...



...How about some Zelda chow? :D This is a currently outdated version of the story, but...I guess it could use some love. :P

...Um. All the chapters are going to be in that thread. >> I don't care what part of it you review (or the whole thing, if you want). Also. Anything else in my portfolio is up for sale, too, if you want. Since you wanz moar revuus. xP
When Heroes fall and the Sacred Blade is captured, can Evil be stopped?~The Wings of Darkness

I'm also ZeldaMoogle on Fanfiction.net!

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Sat Dec 04, 2010 5:14 pm
Remrock says...



Hey Pink! Could you please review a short piece that I'm working on right now? It's fantasy fiction.

Morning Ride



Thanks,
Rem

Thanks,
Rem
"Play on
When you're losing the game
Play on
'Cause you're gonna make mistakes
It's always worth to sacrifice
Even when you think you're wrong
So play on
Play on"

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Sun Dec 05, 2010 7:56 pm
Shearwater says...



Gladius-In progress

Remrock, it seems that I get an 'under construction' page when I click on your link, if you provide a working link I can go back and review it. ^^

Thanks,
-Shear
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Tue Dec 07, 2010 2:55 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hey Dad. :wink:

Till Rem sends the link, could you review this for me? It's the second chapter of my and Lily's project which she is not doin now and the name's changed and it's on my ID. Okay, enough of it.

Here: Know I'm Here
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Thu Dec 09, 2010 3:00 pm
Shearwater says...



Gladius- In Progress
Shubhi-Done!

:)
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Fri Dec 10, 2010 7:27 pm
Angela says...



Hey PinkShearwater! Can you review this story for me? I want to submit it to a magazine, and am in desperate need of any reviews possible. It's a romantic short story. It's called 'Almost'. It's a lot better written than this request (I think). Here's the link:

viewtopic.php?t=72189

Thanks so much!
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Sat Dec 11, 2010 4:47 pm
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Hecate says...



Can you review this short story please?
topic73100.html

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Sat Dec 11, 2010 11:36 pm
Button says...



If you have some extra time, could you please take a look at this?

topic73112.html
Thanks! I really appreciate it. c:

-Coral-
  





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Mon Dec 13, 2010 11:43 pm
SilentRain says...



Hello!! This is my second attemp of the Prolouge for my fisrt noval... Its a fantasy/adventure noval...

topic73167.html

Thanks,

~Rain~
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Wed Dec 15, 2010 4:33 pm
Shearwater says...



Angela-Done
stelagineva-Done
Persephoneia-Done
SilentRain-Done

Sorry about the delay. ^.^'
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