Hi Demeter. You think you could look this over for me? It's a romance, and I'm attempting to write a novel. I want to know how I did on the first part. You don't have to if you don't, but I'd appreciate it!
I've got a poem that I'd like reviewed, particularly your opinion as to whether or not it's worthy of being entered in a writing contest in which I will be competing against highschoolers.
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕
My name is Ashley. I found this poem among my things. It's from a few years ago. I don't remember when or why I wrote it, but I'm quite impressed with it myself and I would love your feedback on it.
When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself. — LadyMysterio
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