Hey Suz! Do you mind reviewing this? It's a short part to a two piece little romance story, like, 700 words. But I could really use an opinion on the flow of things and on the general tone...pwease.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
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I will not give reviews to someone who is not requesting it for themselves. So, essentially, you cannot request that I give reviews to another person; they should come ask me for the review themselves.
Besides, I already discussed that poem with Conrad via IM and in great detail. We're buds like that.
“It's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.” ― Alexandre Dumas, The Count of Monte Cristo
Hey, Suzanne. Could you take a look at this for me? It is historical fiction and somewhat romantic as well. This is only the first chapter. Thanks so much, in advance.
You poor take courage You rich take care This earth was made a common treasury For everyone to share All things in common All people one We come in peace The orders came to cut them down
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