I have the first two parts of the first chapter of my fantasy novel up, they are both relatively short. (around 800 words) If you could critque the second part, that would just make my day. Though, you'll probably have to read the first part for the second part to make sense. But here is the link.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
Hi! I wrote a poem at around midnight last night. It's a bit rough but I don't really know what to do with it. If you have time to do a review that would be awesome!
When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself. — LadyMysterio
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