Hey! Uuh if you're not too busy do you think you could review my third chapter of my novel? Anytime you could get around to it would be really appreciated. Thank yoouuu
“It is well known that reading quickens the growth of a heart like nothing else.”
― Catherynne M. Valente, The Girl Who Circumnavigated Fairyland in a Ship of Her Own Making
Hey @StormyZSnifter! I read through it and, I have to admit, I don't understand the plot/characters. Should I read the first one through or can you explain what the characters are (werewolves??) and the plot?
Oh reading the previous chapters would definitely help lol I'm so sorry!! I don't have time to paraphrase the plot now but I swear reading the previous chapters would make it make sense
“It is well known that reading quickens the growth of a heart like nothing else.”
― Catherynne M. Valente, The Girl Who Circumnavigated Fairyland in a Ship of Her Own Making
Hello! I write poetry, I think you know that. If I am not mistaken, I believe you have liked a few. I am interested to see your interpretations and would love a review or two on any of my work. You can pick whichever one interests you the most, whatever sings to your soul, a beggar can't be a chooser. Thank you!
However bittersweet illusions taste, they are still filling and I could only hope to my wildest dreams that I could burden those tastes for you, and you can keep dancing in the artful rain.
However bittersweet illusions taste, they are still filling and I could only hope to my wildest dreams that I could burden those tastes for you, and you can keep dancing in the artful rain.
I was wondering if you would review a poem... I posted it days ago and it's still in the Green Room. It's a little violent... a little bit of a rant and it's called: Born A Girl
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