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Sat Jun 03, 2017 10:22 pm
Kaylaa says...



Accepting
anything and everything!


Poetry. Novel chapters. Articles. Short stories. Lyrics. Anything at all can be requested to be reviewed here. I'm not picky with what I review, though as many already know I'm most frequently reviewing poetry, and that's my niche.

That doesn't mean I won't review anything else, though, because I'm completely open to reviewing anything. I'm fine with 18+ works. Doesn't matter if it's in the Green Room or not--basically, you link it and I'll review it.

Payment isn't needed. Show me what you've got. If it ends up being too much at once (which is probably very rare) then I'll put it on hold to catch up with the requested reviews, though I don't see that happening anytime soon.

Thanks!
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Sun Jun 04, 2017 3:30 pm
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BluesClues says...



Pssst. Wanna review...THIS?

The Chosen Grandma
Genre: Fantasy/humor.
Rating: (video game commercial voice) Rated E for everyone.
Pitch: Eighty-three-year-old Chosen One Edna Fisher leaves the nursing home to find the Sword of Destiny and defeat the evil sorcerer Redway and his army of dragons.

Review Ideas: General thoughts on characters, general thoughts on plot, whether or not the plot makes sense/flows logically so far, anything you particularly like or don't like (whether or not it's technically "correct"), and whatever constructive criticism you have to offer.

I linked you to the folder instead of a specific chapter because it starts with a prologue, so you have the option to skip that if it's not your thing. That's the longest single bit, around 2000 words, but the rest are each around 1500 words. You can read as few or as many chapters as you like.

Also, you can tag me if you want reviews back on some literary works, although I should warn you that if it's poetry I might not be too helpful - well, unless you let me know what you want to know about it specifically. I'll try it out either way.
  





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Kaylaa says...



@BlueAfrica Sure! I can go ahead and start on it probably tonight because you're a lovely human and deserve the best and because I'm free. It might take me awhile to get completely caught up, though!

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Wed Jun 07, 2017 1:47 am
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beccalicious94 says...



If you have time, I'd love if you could review this short thing: =]

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Wed Jun 07, 2017 11:39 pm
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Certainly! I'll get right on that.

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Thu Jun 08, 2017 12:00 am
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@beccalicious94 Done with that! I hope it helps you.

@BlueAfrica Sorry for being such a bum. I'm going to try and mainly review your novel tomorrow to catch up some more. Still loving it, though!

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Thu Jun 08, 2017 12:24 am
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BluesClues says...



It's fine! I just appreciate getting more reviews, no matter how long it takes :)
  





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Tue Jun 13, 2017 3:12 pm
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Tuckster says...



Hey there,
I would appreciate a review on my work Royal Goose Chase. It's a short story and is still sitting in the green room with 0 reviews. Here's a link:
Royal Goose Chase
Do not try to be pretty. You weren't meant to be pretty; you were meant to burn down the earth and graffiti the sky. Don't let anyone ever simplify you to just 'pretty'
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Tue Jun 13, 2017 6:42 pm
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I'll get on it as soon as I can @MJTucker, so consider it done.

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Tue Jun 13, 2017 6:48 pm
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Thanks a lot :)
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Wed Jun 14, 2017 4:41 pm
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@MJTucker And done! I hope the review helped.

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Mon Jun 19, 2017 3:58 pm
LeviLowe says...



Hey Nikayla!

I've been writing something titled "Atomic Entanglement, Love, and Gravity," which is yet to be reviewed. I'd love if you could be the first reviewer. Constructive criticism and highlights of high-points would be greatly appreciated. It's about 40 pages on Google Docs at this point.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AW7 ... sp=sharing
  





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Mon Jun 19, 2017 5:08 pm
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Hi there, LeviLowe! It seems you're new to this site, so I have a bit of explaining to do. When I say reviewing, it means on the site and via The Green Room! You can publish this work of yours through there, and if you don't already know where it is, it's the black bar at the top of the page. I see you've already done a review, so you're not completely unfamiliar with how the system works. I'll go ahead and give you 600 points to get started, and with that you can post three literary works.

After that, you'll have to keep reviewing to post (and from what I've seen your reviews are pretty nice)! I see you've posted the work on the site, so I can go ahead and review it there instead of Google Docs.

I'll get on it as soon as possible!

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Tue Jun 20, 2017 1:45 am
Kaylaa says...



Done! I hope the review helped.

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Cheat your landlord if you can and must, but do not try to shortchange the Muse. It cannot be done. You can’t fake quality any more than you can fake a good meal.
— William S. Burroughs