Hey, so I was just wondering if you could review my work? I'm trying to get as much feed back as I can before I go back and take each sentence apart to edit with all the reviews. It would really mean a lot to me even if you don't get through everything, I know its long... one chapter will make me a happy camper Thank you!
I have an intro to a series I'm most likely going to continue, and I'd like feedback. If you have a suggestion, don't not put it in because you're being polite. But I guess that's what this thread is about, isn't it? https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=134410
Can you do some of my writing? You only need to do one, and I think that a good, thorough review is what I need. Here are the two stories I need to have reviewed more:
That's the first chapter of the book I'm presently writing. So I'm open to any kind of criticism,suggestions or ideas.Please do go through it during your free time...it's not a lengthy one though.
I have requested reviews from you in the past, and enjoyed your feedback so much I just had to return.
This is a personal narrative/essay style piece that I know needs quite a bit (ok, ALOT) of doctoring, but I feel strongly about it and would love to hear any advice you may have for improving it.
There is literally no structure to it, I kind of just threw up words all over my keyboard.
Hi I would really like reviews for my realistic short story The Other Side it's for a short story writing competition and has to be submitted by tomorrow so I need it done asap thanks smxx
DogFruit wrote:Hi! I think what my writing needs is some cold hard advice. Plus I'm trying to get better at accepting constructive criticism... Go at it!
I'd be particularly interested in your impressions of the overall tone of the piece, as well as your interpretation of what is actually going on in the story.
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