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Thu Dec 31, 2015 3:50 pm

Lightsong says...

@felistia: Done! Come back again sooner or later!

"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin

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Thu Dec 31, 2015 5:56 pm

MissGangamash says...

Hi! I was wondering if you could read and review an extract from a novel I'm working on. Here's the link : Bad Seed (extract)

I'm uploading a whole novel on here and I'm about half way through it already. I would appreciate reviews on that but if you don't have the time I understand, it's quite long. Here's the link anyway: The Progeny (Prologue)

Thank you and hope you enjoy

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Thu Jan 07, 2016 4:48 pm

Lightsong says...

@MissGangamash: It'd take a while to review the Bad Seed's excerpt, so hopefully you'll be patient!

Unfortunately, I can't review The Progeny right now as I'm reviewing another novel, and my status as a worker limits my reviewing.

"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin

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Points: 304
Reviews: 289

Thu Jan 07, 2016 6:47 pm

MissGangamash says...

Thank you

I will be patient haha. And no problem about The Progeny, I didn't expect you to have the time but I though I'd just ask

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Sun Jan 17, 2016 12:58 pm

Lightsong says...

@MissGangamash: Done! Come back again sooner or later!

"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin

Gender:

Points: 304
Reviews: 289

Mon Jan 18, 2016 5:58 pm

MissGangamash says...

Thank you!

Gender:

Points: 25
Reviews: 472

Fri Jan 22, 2016 3:52 am

Lightsong says...

*blows dust on topic*

"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin

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Points: 1335
Reviews: 277

Tue Jan 26, 2016 2:29 am

Charm says...

Can you please review my novel, New Haven.
Here's the link to the first chapter:
New Haven: Chapter 2: The Train of Memories

Charm's Work Club
WRFF
NaPo
she/her

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Points: 25
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Tue Jan 26, 2016 6:08 am

Lightsong says...

@MadWriter7: That's the second chapter, not the first. Which one you want me to review? >.>

"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin

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Reviews: 1087

Sun Jan 31, 2016 3:23 pm

Sins says...

Heya Lightsong!

I was just wondering if you'd mind taking a mosey on over to the first chapter of my novel. Would be much appreciated

The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)

Please and thank you!

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

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Sun Jan 31, 2016 3:31 pm

Lightsong says...

Somehow I feel like this is the effect of putting a new status in my profile... e.e THAT BEING SAID, I would try reviewing this chapter quickly, @Skins, using the phone. >.> If I don't review quickly, it means I'd review it eventually, when I buy a new laptop charger.

"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin

Gender:

Points: 44360
Reviews: 1087

Sun Jan 31, 2016 4:24 pm

Sins says...

Oh that's fine, no worries!

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

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Thu Feb 04, 2016 2:45 pm

themanofstars says...

Hope and Me

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Sat Feb 06, 2016 4:19 pm

Lightsong says...

@Skins and @themanofstars: Reviews done! Do come back again soon!

"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin

Gender:

Points: 368
Reviews: 456

Sun Feb 07, 2016 11:21 pm

Rascalover says...

Do you review any realistic romances?
Ohana Means Family~ Chapter Two

Please

There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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