Young Writers Society

Hi Rosey!

I'd like a review on my 1st chapter of my ongoing story, Blessings, in the Other Fiction section.

Link: topic45999.html

Thanks!

Lil- Working on it!

Done!

Any more?

Hi Rosey,

After your great critique on the first chapter of Dreams of Giants, can I ask you to please review these pieces:

Dreams of Giants:
Prologue: topic44939.html

Chapter 1 Part 2: topic45511.html

Chapter 2 Part 1: topic46223.html

Thanks so much.

The prologue is done yrclever!

Mind reviewing the first chapter in my Other Fiction novel, Rosey? I hate to ask for reviews, but I hear yours are so darn good, and I really want to make this one its best.

topic46313.html

Review in whatever style you like, darling.

*hands a pack of cookies*

Title: Faery Dancer #1
Genre: Historical
Link: post539805.html#539805
Summary: Set in Stuart England, a girl runs away from a freak show and has to cope with living in the outside world.

Character impressions, how it works as a first chapter and general overall thing, please. Thanks!

That took longer then I wanted, but everybody is finished!

Anybody else?

I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book?

Chapter 1 & 2

topic46539.html

Chapter 3 and 4

post541780.html#541780

i would like as much detail as you see fit to give it, and please please be honest

Thanks so much xx

I'm done Ryan! As much as I can do, anyways.

Who's next?

Hey Rosey! How you doin'?
Would you review my NaPo's thread, please?
topic46629.html

Thank you, Rosey!

Hey Rosey =]

Can you please review this for me?

It's chapter two, part one of my untitled story

topic46654.html

Thanks!

xDudettex

Hey Rosey,

When you get a chance can you please do this for me.

topic46665.html

It's the next piece of Dreams of Giants.

Thanks so much

Have a great one!

Hey Rosey =]

Could you possibly review the next part of my Untitled story for me, please?

topic46846.html

Thank you!

xDudettex

I'll get on it tomorrow Dudette!

Everybody before that request is finished, though!