Hi! I have posted my first chapter of the novel. There are some reviews but mostly about grammar. I request you to tell me whether the plot is engaging. (I have no problem, if you say, that it was stupid). The Perfect Thief (Working title) Chapter 1
Hey. I was wondering if you could review the fanfiction novel I'm writing. Its my first work so I apologize if it is...well...terrible. Its Teen Titans related...I don't know if you like them or not but I still ask if you could give a shot and review (with some really helpful writing tips, perhaps?) Thank you very much.
I'd like somebody to critique my Intro, I'd love to hear something constructive or at least an opinion on the voice/tone/pacing/choice of words and maybe even plot so far.
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