Can you please help me review my novel --- Empyrosis? I've posted the first and second chapter already, and I'll probably post the third in a week or so.
Thank you so much! (Oh, and can I call you Yuri?)
you'll never find another sweet little girl with sequined sea foam eyes ocean lapping voice, smile coy as the brightest quiet span of sky and you're all alone again tonight; not again, not again, not again. and don't it feel alright, and don't it feel so nice? lovely.
wow you have a lot of people to review. i heard that poetry isn't your thing, but i want more reviews on my two poems, "my calm" and "who I am". if you could do one or both of them that would be super fantastic thanks nicchaos
In greek mythology, chaos was the formess void from which came night and day, the earth and sky, time and light, gods and beasts. In short, all things were born from chaos.
Cheers Yuri! =) If you've been wondering why I haven't been requesting like usual, I guess it was me working out ideas and stuff for something I feel more comfortable at. ( Sorry x_X Sinful Pride project held for later, can't put my science fiction in it due to historical time )
I would be most appreciative if you could take a quick look and maybe review these two short extracts I have that are from a Romance/Science Fiction novel I'm working on currently called Heal. (Until I think of something better and less obvious.) I don't want to be greedy, one or the other is fine. I just thought I'd post them both as they're brand new and from the same story.
"If you want to be a writer, you must do two things above all others: read a lot and write a lot. There's no way around these two things that I'm aware of, no shortcut." - Stephen King.
(Oh, and can I call you Yuri?)
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