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Tue Feb 09, 2010 5:10 pm
Shearwater says...



Hey friend! Do you think you can review this for me??
Pretty please :)
topic58510.html?forum_uri=

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Tue Feb 09, 2010 8:35 pm
LookUpThere says...



WOuld you please review my latest story?

topic58409.html

The Janitors - Prologue

Thanks, Hero out.
  





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Tue Feb 09, 2010 9:53 pm
peanut19 says...



Lassie......Do you think you could review a 50k novel? It's in Advanced Critiques. I'm not gonna put the link so you can say no :) If you say yes I'll give the link. I've noticed that a lot of the review threads here don't mention Advanced Critiques. :P

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Fri Feb 12, 2010 10:33 pm
KanenRenoir says...



Will you review the novel I'm working on. It's called the Assassin's Redemption. Here's a link:
topic58466.html

Thanks.
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Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:30 pm
ToritheMonster says...



Hi! Could you review part twelve of my story in other fiction? Sorry If you don't understand what's happening, I just want a grammar, etc. review.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic58494.html

Thanks! And I don't mind harshness!

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Wed Feb 17, 2010 5:57 pm
LookUpThere says...



Could you review my story please. The Janitors Chap 1:

topic58813.html

Thanks! TheHero
  





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Sat Feb 20, 2010 2:35 am
antimelrose says...



Hello! I was wondering if you could please review my poem "Bird of Recess". It's in the Other Poetry category.
topic59114.html

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Sat Feb 20, 2010 5:11 pm
LookUpThere says...



Need some Class for my review. Would you mind, Act/Adv? Superhero teenagers...

topic58813.html

Someone says it should be Urban Fantasy or Sci-Fi but I'm not so sure.
  





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Mon Feb 22, 2010 7:49 pm
captain.classy says...



I am so sorry guys! My computer is being mean and I can't get online. I will do these as soon as possible. Sorry it's not a speedy quick review as usual.

Classy
  





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Tue Mar 09, 2010 10:07 pm
*coco says...



Hey classy! Coco here again, hope your well :D I've finally posted up chapter 10 for you to look at when your not busy. I'm kinda nervous to see what you make of it but fingers crossed you'll enjoy the chapter.
Thanks a million
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Wed Mar 10, 2010 8:54 pm
ToritheMonster says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic59756.html

Heya! Could you please review the link above? It's part two of a three part story. If you want to read part one so you understand what's happening, there's a link within the story.
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Thu Mar 11, 2010 1:27 am
FlyingInEbony says...



Hi, Classy! I would absolutely love if you could review this for me... Please? Pretty please? With sugar and a cherry on top?

It's in the Other Fiction forum. The piece ties in some of the themes of Romeo and Juliet to a young boy's perspective on his country's advances, which happens to be Nazi Germany.

topic59730.html

Thanks! :smt003
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Thu Mar 11, 2010 2:18 am
Nephthys says...



Could you please review this for me?
It's Science Fiction and 1200 words.

topic60055.html

Thanks very much :)
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