Young Writers Society

Okay, Dream's and Rocky's are both done! AA, you want me to do something?

Also open to as many others as people can throw at me!

Hey Hope.
Ah...actually I'd rather this one get shoved away.
But next time I have one, I choose you!

Yes, but just recently someone said they would before you. Though, it wouldn't hurt if you looked at it as well. Other people have looked at the first few sections, but have since moved on. They sailed to another story like pirate to another continent. Or, James Bond to another mission.

So...

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Haha, Hope. I'm not going to dare you, but you're title here is hilarious. XD

Someone had better dare me soon...and if they don't then... then I'll kick a puppy...yeah, so make me gosh darn it!

Hello I posted a segment of my novel and wanted a review. Let me warn you, you might not understand much because it's smack-dab in the middle of the story. Also, it's right in the middle of a chapter. But for the record it's about a girl and her gaurdian angel whom she just met. He's known her before she was born though. They're going through a rough time right now (being chased by demons). The grammar is terrible and the writing's not amazing but just let me know if you find it interesting. It's called Triston's proposal under romantic fiction. Thanks.

Hey bondgirl, help me review this please, it's called The Elemental Guardians Chapter 1 and it's under Fantasy fiction.
Here's the link
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Working on it now Pen! And Molly, link me please Pm, or post here, whatever...it's just a hassle having to go look for it .

Hey BondGirl!

Can you review this for me please?
It's under Lyric Poetry and it's name is Little Missy

Thanks so much!

Finished! Come on people! I want to be flooded with reviews I have to do. Let's go!

I dare you to review my poem. (You do poetry right?)
It's called Doesn't he?

Thanks!

Thank you! Finished!

Rawr. You made me.

I DARE YOU TO REVIEW...... ALLL OF MY WORK!!!! I triple dog double dog dare you!! Betcha cant do it!

Hope, I DARE you to review my whole novel. http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic58539.html It's in Advanced Critiques. And I don't know if you'll do it because it's horror-ish. It's not really that bad so I don't think you'll mind.

~peanut~

Could you check out my fantasy novel? It's called the Assassin's Redemption-Redrafted. You'll probably want to skip down to my third post cause that's the edited version of it. Here's a link:
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if you can find time to do it I'd really appreciate it.

Thanks