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Thu Mar 17, 2011 12:11 am
Twit says...



Hey! It's fantasy, so I apologize, and feel free to hand me the mitten if you so wish. :)

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Thu Mar 17, 2011 1:02 am
Rascalover says...



All done, who's next? :)
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Mon Mar 21, 2011 11:49 pm
Rascalover says...



Need a review anyone?
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Mon Mar 28, 2011 11:22 pm
Rascalover says...



Anyone?
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Sat Apr 02, 2011 2:02 am
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bump*
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Sat Apr 02, 2011 9:01 pm
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I'd appreciate it if you could review this post841635.html#p841635
Thanks!
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Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:40 am
Rascalover says...



All done, who needs one right now?
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Sun Apr 03, 2011 11:28 pm
Lalaland says...



Could you review the first chapter of a possible project for me, please? It's realistic fiction. :) It's a weeny bit long, so I hope that's okay.

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Mon Apr 04, 2011 1:01 am
Rascalover says...



All done :) Who'se next ?
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Mon Apr 04, 2011 1:40 pm
MiaParamore says...



Me! :P

Here's the piece, and thanks in advance! Turning the Tables (1.1)

Thanks so much! Do tell me if you'll need anything reviewed.
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Mon Apr 04, 2011 9:24 pm
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All done whos next? :)
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Sat Apr 09, 2011 2:58 am
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bump :)
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Sat Apr 09, 2011 10:06 am
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Yuriiko says...



Hey there!

Will you please review this: topic79009.html ?
Thank you. :)
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Sat Apr 09, 2011 11:23 pm
Jesiica says...



Hello, could you please review my short story? topic79089.html

The alternative version is Here: post845697.html#p845697

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Sun Apr 10, 2011 4:14 pm
Rascalover says...



All done :)

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