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Hey, Demeter. I really need help with a story I'm working on. It's called Poisoned Roses in Romantic Fiction and it is a vampire story. *sighs* I know what you are thinking, that there are a lot of vampire stories out there, but I hope you enjoy them. If you don't, you totally don't have to do this

Well, just so you have a background, I have ben working on this forever, and I just now am going back and rewriting the whole darn thing *sighs again* hehe But I have a good feeling about the draft I'm writing so I've decided to ask for your help.

Here is the link to the Preface: topic40158.html

If you ever want to read more of it, just let me know

Hope you enjoy it and here are your cookies in advance

*hands over a platter of fresh baked chocolate chip cookies*

But once you finish with the critique, I'll give you the chocolate bar I have waiting for you lol

Thanks, Demeter!

It's finished now. Thanks for the cookies!

Hello there

Thank you so much for the review! It was very helpful indeed, I appreciate it!

Sofi.

I'm glad you think so!

Could you please review my story, Jimmy, in other fiction?

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It's a bit of a step out of my comfort zone, so if you feel the need to beat me with a bad characterisation mallet or weapon of your choice, do it gently.
Thanks in advance.

'Ello ello, Demeter.

I just posted this piece, so if you could bestow it with one of your super-fabulous reviews, that'd be great.

I'm happy to see that you like reviewing romantic fiction. This is where the piece is posted, although I haven't gotten to the romantic-y part just yet, at least not in this chapter.

Link! topic41045.html

Thanks again!

Please review this poem! It needs a review ^^

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No Queue!

Will you shred this for me please?

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All done.

Rosey's is done – that means no queue!

Ooh. I would love a review of my story, "The Lights Begin To Twinkle." It's a short story in Other Fiction.

Here it is: topic41404.html

Thanks!

Yours is done, monsieur.

More, please!

Hello! I have a short story that needs to be critiqued. Like, ripped apart. I showed it to a friend yesterday, and told her 'tell me why you hate this', simply because I want this to be the best it can be.
If you can help, I'll be extremely grateful
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I don't think it would be classified as fantasy, but rather realistic fiction.
Thanks ever so much