Hi! Thank you all for critiquing this, I just finished editing and revising in some places that needed it. I would be grateful if you could read it again to make sure its okay. Cause you never know, it could be worse. Thank you!
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Kashmere Gallant is a normal twelve year old girl, other than the fact that she was born into the richest family in the state of Nevada. But as she gets home from her long months at boarding school, she finds her parents dead in the night, her being spared by a boy with maroon flecks in his eyes.
Maroon is a boy of twelve, living with his guardian, Justin, who is a serial killer, forcing Maroon to help with his dirty work. But Maroon doesn’t want to kill anymore, especially when he first meets the young girl Kashmere.
Three years after the murder, Kashmere doesn’t remember a thing about being saved by a boy with maroon tinted eyes. But when Maroon moves back into town, bringing recollections along with him, both him and Kashmere have to make a choice. Lie and love, or be honest and be hated.
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