I Wear My Faith Like A Second Skin

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In a previous writing workshop, I submitted and shared a couple of short stories that went hand in hand with each other. The class liked them enough to express interest in me turning my project into a novel, and my friend encouraged me after I was hesitant. Well, here it is.

*Genre*
YA Coming of Age


*Elevator Pitch*
When Sofie enters her junior year of high school in a new state, she learns just how far she's willing to go to be accepted.


*Premise*
After spending most of her childhood in a close-knit Muslim community in New York City, Sofie's family moves up to Concord, New Hampshire after her dad accepts a new job. New home, new school, new enemies. Now, Sofie must survive high school drama and come out of it staying true to herself.


I want the story to remain lighthearted, so I'm going to workshop the pitch to not be so dramatic and match better with the premise. I like the title too, but again, I don't really know if it fits. Comments are welcome!

tagging @4revgreen since you were interested in my wip!
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I love the sound of this, and I really love the cover! What inspired you to come up with this story?
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@4revgreen, Simple answer is I always wanted to read a story that featured a Muslim as a main or supporting character in western media as positive portrayals. The closest I got growing up was Sam in the Magnus Chase series, so I decided to create a story that reflected me as I experienced high school!
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Any books by Zoulfa Katouh are really good.
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I love the idea. There's definitely a lack of representation of Muslims in YA. I'll be excited to read it if you ever post here!
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I am very excited to see your progress! This sounds lovely!
Who's to say that my light is better than your darkness? Who's to say death is better than your darkness? Who am I to say?

I am not what happened to me, I am what I choose to become.

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Main Character
Sofia El Mansouri

Age: 16

Goals: Get into an ivy league college

Appearance: olive skin; wavy, black hair, brown eyes; 5’8; slender frame

Personality: Introverted; kind; gentle; emotionally intelligent; organized; stubborn; people-pleaser; weak-willed

Habits/Mannerisms: A perfectionist; always carries a book or a small crochet project; observant

Internal Conflict: Keeping her values or changing them to fit in

External Conflict: Finding her place in a new school
There is always something left to love.
- One Hundred Years of Solitude



You are all the colours in one, at full brightness.
— Jennifer Niven, 'All the Bright Places'