I Wear My Faith Like A Second Skin

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In a previous writing workshop, I submitted and shared a couple of short stories that went hand in hand with each other. The class liked them enough to express interest in me turning my project into a novel, and my friend encouraged me after I was hesitant. Well, here it is.

*Genre*
YA Coming of Age


*Elevator Pitch*
When Sofie enters her junior year of high school in a new state, she learns just how far she's willing to go to be accepted.


*Premise*
After spending most of her childhood in a close-knit Muslim community in New York City, Sofie's family moves up to Concord, New Hampshire after her dad accepts a new job. New home, new school, new enemies. Now, Sofie must survive high school drama and come out of it staying true to herself.


I want the story to remain lighthearted, so I'm going to workshop the pitch to not be so dramatic and match better with the premise. I like the title too, but again, I don't really know if it fits. Comments are welcome!

tagging @4revgreen since you were interested in my wip!
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I love the sound of this, and I really love the cover! What inspired you to come up with this story?
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@4revgreen, Simple answer is I always wanted to read a story that featured a Muslim as a main or supporting character in western media as positive portrayals. The closest I got growing up was Sam in the Magnus Chase series, so I decided to create a story that reflected me as I experienced high school!
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Any books by Zoulfa Katouh are really good.
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I love the idea. There's definitely a lack of representation of Muslims in YA. I'll be excited to read it if you ever post here!
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I am very excited to see your progress! This sounds lovely!
Who's to say that my light is better than your darkness? Who's to say death is better than your darkness? Who am I to say?

I am not what happened to me, I am what I choose to become.

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Main Character
Sofia El Mansouri

Age: 16

Goals: Get into an ivy league college

Appearance: olive skin; wavy, black hair, brown eyes; 5’8; slender frame

Personality: Introverted; kind; gentle; emotionally intelligent; organized; stubborn; people-pleaser; weak-willed

Habits/Mannerisms: A perfectionist; always carries a book or a small crochet project; observant

Internal Conflict: Keeping her values or changing them to fit in

External Conflict: Finding her place in a new school
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Day One

To make this project more fun (and give me incentive to write) I decided to follow the Harry Potter word crawl. My house is Ravenclaw, and I'm a Muggleborn.

I received my Hogwarts letter: 103 words

I visited Gringotts bank: 263 words

I got my wand at Ollivander's: 401 words

Total Words: 767. Total Time: 30.5
There is always something left to love.
- One Hundred Years of Solitude



Everything has to be taken on trust; truth is only that which is taken to be true. It's the currency of living. There may be nothing behind it, but it doesn't make any difference so long as it is honoured. One acts on assumptions. What do you assume?
— Player (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead by Tom Stoppard)