Help me get my fourth star, please!!

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deleted30
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Wed Jan 15, 2014 8:09 pm
deleted30 says... · Wed Jan 15, 2014 8:09 pm
I'm at home sick and bored with literally nothing to do. Seriously. I'm beginning to miss my school. +shivers+

Anything you want thoroughly (but nicely) reviewed, I'm your girl! I'll be honest with you but not mean (I'm incapable of it!), and you'll be helping out someone that wants her fourth star. It's a win-win. :smt003

Novels and short stories preferred since I'm ignorant to the world of poetry but, basically, I'll review whatever. :wink:




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LordXerro
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Thu Jan 16, 2014 12:07 pm
LordXerro says... · Thu Jan 16, 2014 12:07 pm
So I just joined a couple if days ago and this is my first review, even though it's more a conversation starter.
If you don't mind in being asked to review works, would you be willing to take a look at my story, I hope you find stuff to do in your boredom away from school.




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deleted30
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Thu Jan 16, 2014 5:29 pm
deleted30 says... · Thu Jan 16, 2014 5:29 pm
Welcome to YWS! :smt003

I'll get right on that. And if you upload anything else, I'd be happy to review that as well. I'm looking to attack some portfolios today.

(Btw, no need to review any of my stuff in return. I meant to put that in the OP. Unless you need points or whatever.)




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Susurrus
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Mon Jan 20, 2014 6:13 am
Susurrus says... · Mon Jan 20, 2014 6:13 am
Hello! Could you please review this short story?

The Street of Keys

Thanks!




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deleted30
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Mon Jan 20, 2014 6:39 am
deleted30 says... · Mon Jan 20, 2014 6:39 am
Susurrus wrote:Hello! Could you please review this short story?

The Street of Keys

Thanks!


Reviewed! :smt003




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TriSARAHtops
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Mon Jan 20, 2014 11:26 pm
TriSARAHtops says... · Mon Jan 20, 2014 11:26 pm
Heya! would you please review my short story?
Lucy's Cousin (title pending)
Thanks! :-)
if we wait until we're ready
we'll be waiting
for the rest of our lives




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deleted30
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Tue Jan 21, 2014 12:12 am
deleted30 says... · Tue Jan 21, 2014 12:12 am
TriSARAHtops wrote:Heya! would you please review my short story?
Lucy's Cousin (title pending)
Thanks! :-)


Reviewed! :smt003




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Kanome
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Tue Jan 21, 2014 12:20 am
Kanome says... · Tue Jan 21, 2014 12:20 am
You can review my poems in my portfolio if you want c:
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deleted30
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Tue Jan 21, 2014 12:35 am
deleted30 says... · Tue Jan 21, 2014 12:35 am
Kanome wrote:You can review my poems in my portfolio if you want c:


Sure! Just know my reviews might not be very good because I don't know much about poetry. Lol. :D




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PiesAreSquared
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Thu Jan 23, 2014 12:23 pm
PiesAreSquared says... · Thu Jan 23, 2014 12:23 pm
How many reviews to go?

Here is my little morbid snake story

The Fate Of The King of Cobras
The moment you say that one set of moral ideas can be better than another, you are, in fact, measuring them both by a standard, saying that one of them conforms to that standard more nearly than the other. C. S. Lewis

I used to be ZLYF




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deleted30
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Thu Jan 23, 2014 3:43 pm
deleted30 says... · Thu Jan 23, 2014 3:43 pm
@ZLYF, only eight more to go! And I'll get right on that. :D




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horrendous
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Thu Jan 23, 2014 5:43 pm
horrendous says... · Thu Jan 23, 2014 5:43 pm
Eater of Dimensions, Part I

can haz reevyew? pleezums ;-;?
hor·ren·dous
adjective: shockingly dreadful; horrible
synonyms: appalling, frightful, hideous

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Life is like a box of chocolates. Too much will make you sick.




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horrendous
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Fri Jan 24, 2014 2:50 am
horrendous says... · Fri Jan 24, 2014 2:50 am
hi again. i submitted this piece a while ago but apparently somehow set it to Private, so it has no reviews. can you change that plox?

Arthur's Showdown, Part II
hor·ren·dous
adjective: shockingly dreadful; horrible
synonyms: appalling, frightful, hideous

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Life is like a box of chocolates. Too much will make you sick.




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deleted30
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Fri Jan 24, 2014 3:01 am
deleted30 says... · Fri Jan 24, 2014 3:01 am
@horrendous, sure! I'll review it right now. :D

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