Who can give me some review cookies?

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Ravenboy
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Mon Jan 06, 2014 11:08 am
Ravenboy says... · Mon Jan 06, 2014 11:08 am
Hello all:

I'm willing to review anything. Short stories, poems, novels and such things. I have nothing to do in the holidays, so most of your reviews will be accepted rather quickly. I usually take time with all my reviews, giving constructive opinions on your content, structure and such things.

I can sometimes be quite blunt in my reviews as well, so be warned.

So, I hope I get some requests to quench the boredom.

All is welcome!

-Ravenboy
The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep. ~Robert Frost




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GoldFlame
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Thu Jan 23, 2014 3:16 am
GoldFlame says... · Thu Jan 23, 2014 3:16 am
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eldEr
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Fri Jan 24, 2014 4:32 pm
eldEr says... · Fri Jan 24, 2014 4:32 pm
Hey! How about:

The Overlooked and Underestimated

But only if you're comfortable with what's listed in the blurb :P
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Ravenboy
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Sun Feb 16, 2014 4:25 am
Ravenboy says... · Sun Feb 16, 2014 4:25 am
@GoldFlame, why??
The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep. ~Robert Frost




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Ravenboy
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Sun Feb 16, 2014 4:29 am
Ravenboy says... · Sun Feb 16, 2014 4:29 am
@Isha. Albeit late, the review has been completed!
The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep. ~Robert Frost




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GoldFlame
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Sun Feb 16, 2014 5:34 am
GoldFlame says... · Sun Feb 16, 2014 5:34 am
Sorry, I deleted the piece I was going to request a review for. Rest assured, you're an amazing reviewer :P.
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Ravenboy
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Sun Feb 16, 2014 7:08 am
Ravenboy says... · Sun Feb 16, 2014 7:08 am
Well, if you ever need any work to be review, you know where to come!
The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep. ~Robert Frost




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GoldFlame
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Mon Feb 17, 2014 1:06 am
GoldFlame says... · Mon Feb 17, 2014 1:06 am
Would appreciate you taking a look at my novel, Molten Silver. Oh, and in compensation for filling up this page, I'll review something of yours :D.
“He leant tensely against the wall and frowned like a man trying to unbend a corkscrew by telekinesis.” – Douglas Adams




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NerdBird
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Wed Feb 19, 2014 10:06 pm
NerdBird says... · Wed Feb 19, 2014 10:06 pm
Hi there! Nerd Bird here!
I would greatly appreciate it if you could review the beginning of my first novel The Shifties! :D

You can find the first two chapters here:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/profile/NerdBird/portfolio/462161

Cant wait to read your feedback!
:)




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Ravenboy
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Fri Feb 21, 2014 9:47 am
Ravenboy says... · Fri Feb 21, 2014 9:47 am
@GoldFlame, @NerdBird,

Hello, sorry for the delay in reviewing. I have been busy of late, but I shall get right down to it!
The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep. ~Robert Frost




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Hippyhoodrat
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Sat Sep 26, 2015 12:01 am
Hippyhoodrat says... · Sat Sep 26, 2015 12:01 am
In desperate need of some feedback on some of the poems I've posted recently. Thanks so much.




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yizhongt
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Sun Sep 27, 2015 12:04 am
yizhongt says... · Sun Sep 27, 2015 12:04 am
Hey there, could you please review:

Chalice of Life: Chapter 9

Thanks in advance ! If you could review the other chapters as well, that would be terrific.




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Selena1016
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Mon Sep 28, 2015 2:32 am
Selena1016 says... · Mon Sep 28, 2015 2:32 am
My history report on the movie The Patriot
hey, i need a review ASAP
would be awesome if you can help, thanks




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Kale
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Mon Sep 28, 2015 4:06 pm
Kale says... · Mon Sep 28, 2015 4:06 pm
@Hippyhoodrat, @yizhongt, @Selena1016

Ravenboy hasn't been active since February, so it's unlikely he'll be reviewing you anytime soon. I'd recommend requesting reviews from the threads marked as Open. You can click the Open tag to see all the threads that are currently active and accepting requests.

Good luck getting reviews!
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