Free Marked Text Editing, Any Length or Genre

I give very in-depth reviews and edits. I copy+paste the entire story and go through and fill the text with corrections, suggestions and opinions. At the end I usually give a final reaction. If you'd like samples, you can look at my previous reviews to get a good idea of what I do.

I'm happy reviewing here on YWS, or you can send me your document through email if you'd prefer. Just remember that if I say something you don't like, you don't have to listen. I'm just another person.
Respond to this post with a link to the work and I'll get to it fairly quickly. I'm happy to edit novels, just make sure to send me links to all the parts.

I do all genres, but only stories or articles. I don't do poetry, scripts, lyrics, etc. If your story has erotic content, I won't refuse to look at it but I will skip those parts.

Hey! I would love it if you could review my story. It's my first ever work, so I'd love to get some pointers.
Thanks!
The Little Red Box

Awesome, done Thank you, I enjoyed it.

You can try mine out for size if you'd like.

Quest Unable Chapter One (Rough Draft)

Will do! I'll try to get to it tomorrow but I have a lot of stuff going on, so I'll probably do it Saturday. We'll see though.

Done! Not my taste, but an interesting read nonetheless

Hey joebot!! If you're up for a challenge could you review my novel for me? (You did say any length )

Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart (Prologue)
Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart (Part I)
Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart (Part II)
Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart (Part III)
Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart (Part IV)
Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart (Part V)

I know it's a lot. If it's too long for you then maybe just do a few chapters? I would really appreciate it. I'm also really interested in how it flows as a whole novel. Thanks

Yeeeessss! I love bigger projects.I have finals for the next couple days so I'll get after at as soon as all this madness is over

Hey Joebot,

I would love to have you read and edit my story and give me some feedback. I haven't posted my story on Young Writer's Society, as I think it's a little to early in the works to let anybody else read it besides a few close friends. All of whom say they can't really understand the central message of the story.
If you think you are up for the challenge, I would love to email you a copy of the story and hear from your feedback. If you leave your email as a comment or message me on here, and I'll send you a copy.

Good luck on your finals,
Paris C.

Of course, totally understandable. I just sent you a PM with my email. Can't wait to read it

Gay Rights in Russia

Hello! This is a short article I wrote about Gay Rights in Russia. I'm possibly going to enter it into a competition. Any major criticisms or even tiny nitpicks would be much appreciated and I just don't know if I've invoked Godwin's Law at the end or if, in this circumstance, it's justified.
Thanks!

I'm done with school and helping my family out with Christmas stuff, but I'll be after all of these things as soon as I can! It'll probably have to be after Christmas since my parents don't exactly like me huddled behind my computer while everyone else is being "social". Happy holidays everyone

Hey, whenever you get back. Could you please review my poem 'Framed' ? Is my first one, and I would appreciate it a lot if you could review it.

-Rx

@Silverlock I just reviewed your prologue. To be fair to other people, I'm going to get some of these other things done and then I'll get right back onto your chapters.
(I'm excited to keep reading it by the way )

@ParisCarter I'll be finishing up my review of yours by this evening. Then I'll be reading yours @guineapiggirl

@Ravaien I really just do essays and stories, but I'll take a look and do my best to give you some advice.

I'm really sorry @Ravaien but I looked at your poem and I really just can't give constructive criticism with poetry. I thought it looked great and really had very little to say. I wish you luck finding someone with a better eye for that stuff than me

All right, @Silverlock ! I'm starting again on your story. Prologue and Chapter 1 cleared!

Come on everyone! Give me more, more, more!