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@TheMessenger, sorry:/ easy to get carried away…
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OK, I am waiting for Cailey to post. Remember, I want a variety here of posts from different users.




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we seem to be kinda moving in circles y'all. just sayin'...
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well, we don't really seem to be establishing anything or getting anywhere...idk...
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So now Torkon is standing outside alone.

So I was thinking either someone could come out for a conversation and therefore some more character development, or maybe something could happen to him and we could get a bit more plot in there.

What do you think @TheMessenger any ideas of a little plot twist here?

Also, do we get to know any more of the plot? Like what the object is or what kind of creatures the monsters are?
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Well our characters do need to meet other people, and it would be impossible for them to not. As far as plot twists go I am not sure yet. But we do need to move it along. I'm working on how things will progress. The metal thing is actually a super-duper walkie-talkie/ phone. As you will soon find out, on the other end is the lord in the very first post. So, Paul is speaking into it and the lord may reveal some stuff.




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@TheMessenger, what is the language the lizard spoke? Is that supposed to mean something, or is it something random you thought of for him to say?
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It's the lizard language. Our characters don't understand it.




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ah...
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@ajruby12 and @PeanutPheobe, can you chat on here vs the SB?




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Ok, sorry...
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So... does anyone want to come out and talk to Torkon? It would have to be someone who isn't busy helping Paul use the walkie talkie thing.
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Hmm...i guess I can, what do you have in mind?
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I don't know, but I feel like so far Torkon is just the random older guy who sometimes speaks but has really only interacted with Paul.

It would be nice to have a little bit of character development while we wait for the Messenger to reveal the next piece of plot.
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