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Saving most of them for later. I may be dropping little snippets all throughout the book. Just look at my first post and you may realize some of what I am talking about.




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Hey, TheMessenger, on your latest post you ended with Paul having four bodies collide into him from behind. Would that be the robbers, or is it some of us?
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That would be the others. Also, one of the SBers hasn't responded for several days, so I cut him. Therefore there are only six of us besides myself.




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I had been wondering about that, cuz I saw 8 people signed up, but only seven characters...
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so, I am going to write the remainder of the fight scene in the store, just so it doesn't take so many posts. Then all the characters will group up and meet each other.




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Ok… I'm afraid I didn't see that until after I'd posted some more for the fight scene:/ I can delete it if you want…
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Ok, I figured it would be okay…
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@ajruby12, you said in your last post that Kaya picked up one of the "strange devices" on the ground and asked what it was, but in your character summary, you say Kaya carries a pistol, so how exactly would she not know what another gun was? kinda confused me...
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@PeanutPhoebe, she carries it after that.. I failed to mention that in my enrollement..
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Oh, all right…
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Kaya actually made a little machine that worked similarly but was used to pick things up off the ground, not shoot bullets.. :)
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Good job posting, but ruby and Peanut hold on before you post anymore. There are some other characters. :)




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I'm working on a post. It'll get there soon, I promise.
A non-writing writer is a monster courting insanity. -Kafka

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