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Rook · 2013-07-27T15:33:39Z

*completely rewriting this because it was old * Hello~ If you haven't seen me around, I'm fortis! I love reviewing poetry. You really don't have to read this next stuff if you don't want to. I usually try to review the things I think you need help on. If I think you need the most help with your rhythm, I may spend the entire review on that rhythm. If you don't want me to review something in your poem, or if you want me to focus on something specific, please specify . Sometimes, I can't be extremely helpful. That's usually when I think you have a perfectly wonderful poem already , and I can't think of a way to make it better. That may also be a time when your poem confuses me so much I don't understand it enough to give you concrete advice . My reviews range from really long , to a short paragraph . The length depends on how much advice I have to give. It also depends on whether or not I can express myself clearly. (Sometimes I dither on about what exactly I was feeling, and I can't do it, but I spend way to long talking about it, sort of like right now.) Sometimes I review line by line , sometimes mistake that needs lookin' at by mistake , sometimes I just review it. This also depends on what I think would be the most helpful. (if I have a thought after every single one of your lines, I may do line by line. These reviews tend to be longer.) Fair warning: I sometimes tend to focus on literal meaning a little too much. As you can see from those examples, I always try to praise something, and give advice about something. The speed at which I will get to reviewing your poem varies on my mood and motivation. I will get it done eventually, if not quickly. The price? I'd love to see you actually attempt to fix the things I reviewed. I understand if you disagree with what I say, but usually I can tell the difference between "I was too lazy to edit my poem after you reviewed, but not too lazy to ask for more reviews," and "there are reasons for not editing the poem the way you suggested." and of course I don't mind a review on any of my stuff, but I don't mind if you don't review it. Also, I "like" the review requests that I have finished, fyi.

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Sat Jul 11, 2026 4:44 am

canopy says... · Sat Jul 11, 2026 4:44 am

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