Reviews from Blues! [closed]

Do you have a piece of prose that you'd like me to review? Leave them here and a review shall come your way*.

I'd be up for following novels too. Bring them in >D


*May need to wait a few days.

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Thanks

Hi we talked earlier and you said you were going to review my first novel on YWS. Well here it is
The Fading - Chapter One

Both done yesterday. Who is next?

I don't know if you count Scripts as Prose...since they aren't really the same...but this is a script that I wrote, it's fictional. If you want to take a look, maybe?
In On A Secret

~peanut~

I've never actually reviewed a script but I'll try to get it done by tomorrow or the day after

Blues, mah main man/duck!

Would you mind checking out the first chapter of my novel for me? I think you actually read the original version I posted way back in September, but I've revamped it now so I'm curious to find out what you think.

The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)

I've also tried editing it accordingly to the reviews I have on it already, so I want to see if I've been at all successful in doing that.

Please and thank you!

Hey Blues! Don't know if you remember me, I haven't been around forever, but I am making a 'grand' comeback. Could you review this for me? It's the first part of my 'short' story, and it's actually the first story I actually completed:D Any kind of comments appreciated!

Dreamcatcher & Whistleblower (Part 1)

And of course, if you need anything reviewing, don't hesitate to contact me:)

It's been quite a while. Let's bring this back! Now open to requests.

Hi, there!

If you're looking for a novel to review/follow, it would be awesome if you could take a look at my novel The Fighter of Aldea. I've started posting revised chapters and currently have the first five up (split into ten shorter parts). If you'd like to review it, it's totally up to you if you just want to read the first chapter or more. Thanks!

The Fighter Of Aldea - Chapter 1 (Part 1 of 3) - Lydia REVISED

I'll hopefully have the other chapters done over the course of the week, @Leftywriter!

Who's up next?

Hey Blues, if you could take a look at my short story here. It's pretty long so I can understand if you're put off, but it could do with some help.

Hi Blues, it would be smashing if you could review two of my works

Celestial: Spark of War; prologue and chapter one
Celestial: Spark of War; Prologue & Chapter 1

Celestial: spark of war; chapter two
Celestial: Spark of War; Chapter 2

I would appreciate it if you could review Boy Who Cried Wolf.

Hi blues, can you review the first chapter of my novel? I'd really appreciate it!

To The Stars Above (chapter 1)