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I do believe Reise is being perfectly reasonable, here. What you had suggested was a bit over-the-top, and it was just too much power for your character. I know you want her to be all powerful but just because she's a Dark doesn't make her any more powerful than the rest of the clan. And as for her being "controlled" by Kazari, that wouldn't do any good either. She can betray the group and ally with him, but he doesn't have the power nor the authority to control humans. This is what Reise wants, so you must respect her wishes.
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The idea behind it all was for Kazari's influence inside of her, would cause her to slowly sabotage the group killing off NPC members, one by one as they progress though the story. I did in the end plan for a big reveal, and during the final fight with Kazari, she would redeem herself and fight along side the others against him.
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We will start major story line planning soon so if you have something you really want to happen PM me and I'll make a bullet list of things that will be fun and exciting to play out and as the SB goes on we can add to the list and cross stuff out that we've already done.

It will be like a bucket list for this SB.
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In my profile for my Fire user (his name is Dante btw) If I make Dante an art student at a local University will that mess up or not work with your overshadowing plans Oh Captain my Captain? :3

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What they do prior to The Service arriving really doesn't matter, so go for it.
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Naw, Lucy and Tom, the older sister and brother of the group xD
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So the most clever girl and by far the faster than Haylee, I'm using a second character and Angel Raziel is a promise to be the most dangerous, once she actually wants to be dangerous.
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"And finally a rare special ability to take on other elements"
How comes?

Also, before saying anything along the lines of "the greatest of all the characters", I believe you should check with the rest of us if we agree. Because, you know, there isn't one MC or something in this.
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I said most dangerous not the greatest.
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I just thought everyone should know that our players enter this completely inexperienced, but those of you I've been talking to have told me some moves they want their players to be able to do later on and I think those are pretty rad, but, as I'm sure you all know, they won't be able to do the big, fancy moves for quite some time.

Don't worry, there's training time.
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LoyalHeart wrote:I said most dangerous not the greatest.


And I said somewhere along the lines. In any case, comes down to the same point.
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Air is the most dangerous element in the world, on the contrary to what LouisCypher believes that Water is the most dangerous.
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The element is only as strong as the one controlling it. In this case, it's only as strong as the mind of the one controlling the one who's controlling the element.
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I love to see that about Tornados, Water Spouts, Whirlpools and outer space, also I made final adjustments to Angel Raziel's personality, and gave Haylee a more site appropriate theme.
An angel, a knight, a man who will bring light to where there is only darkness, I am the Morning Star, the Bringer of Light, hail to me as I am King Lucifer!

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