Hotel De Scar - started- :)

This is a story I’m making up on the spot, so it may not sound right just yet, but just let me get to editing it and hopefully it will be okay.

You start off at your own houses, booking your rooms in this new hotel called Hotel De Scar. You all have wondered why exactly it was called that but unluckily you never saw the news the previous day explaining about it had housed a murderer. You book and pay for your room over the internet, then you book your flight over to Las Vegas. When you arrive at the airport after the flight you find that the hotel has got a stretch hummer limo to pick you up. You all meet there (you and the other people staying at the hotel). 15 minutes later the driver announces that you are arriving at your destination.
Staring out of the windows you see this massive palace-like building that is hanging over the edge of a cliff.
It looks like it was made 1000 years ago but and it was just recently painted white with gold decorations.
When you walk inside you realise that it is bigger than it looks.
A lot bigger.
You all check in and go to your rooms.
Everything is good until one night.
There is a massive storm that erodes all of the dirt around the rest of the property.
The hotel falls into the water at the bottom of the cliff but somehow manages to float.
It ends up in the middle of the shark infested ocean and when you all wake up you see the ocean and the sharks and figure that can’t leave.
Unlucky though… The murderers are still in the building!

If I have left anything out I will add later thanks.

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Age: 16- 25
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Up for Love:

This sounds AWESOME!!!
and so suspenseful...

Can you reserve me a female spot?
I'll try to get my profile up later.

O_O

Name: Brooklyn Davis

Gender: Female

Age: 21

Appearance: She is tall and thin, with very light, flawless skin. She has milk chocolate hair, which she keeps in a bun, and eyes that are the same color. She normally wears dress pants or a skirt with a dress shirt at work. However on weekends, after school, whenever she's home, or on vacation, she can be seen in shorts and a T-shirt, or if it's a bit cooler, jeans and a sweatshirt.

Fears: Sharks, small spaces, snakes, spiders, feeling trapped, not knowing what's going to happen, (fear of the unknown)

Dislikes: Dishonest people, dancing, clingy people, selfish people, bullies

Likes: Kids, reading, writing, music, history, having some alone time, feeling free, field hockey, tennis, volleyball, acting

Personality: Brooklyn is sweet, yet tough. She loves kids, and writing, and is described by her and others as a free spirit. She lives life to the fullest. She is very friendly, and has no problem making friends. She is the nicest person you will meet unless you do her wrong, or she feels threatened, then you better watch out! She is extremely smart, and graduated high school and college early. She'll be starting her first year as a teacher after this vacation. She loves to listen to and to play music. She is a good singer and plays piano, guitar, and drums. She is also a good actress and will be running the school drama club.

Short bio: Brooklyn grew up in New York City with her father, older brother, Brendan, and two younger sisters, Eileen and Sophie. Her mother left right after her twin younger sisters were born, when Brooklyn was one, and her brother was three. Her father worked three jobs to provide for them, but they still barely scraped by. Since her father was always at work, and her older brother was very irresponsible, getting sent to juvie multiple times, Brooklyn had to grow up fast and take care of her sisters. She still lives in New York City, and is trying to track down her mother, so far with no luck. She is very close to her father and sisters. Her brother is currently in jail, although this time he won't be coming out, he got sentenced for life in prison for murder. She writes a lot in her spare time, though that is only one of her hobbies, she is also currently trying to get a novel published.

Occupation: 7th grade history teacher

Up for love: Sure. She's single and straight.

Name: Izabel McDaniels- “Iza”

Gender: Female

Age: 17 years old

Appearance: Iza is pretty short (she’s only around 5ft 3”) with an athletically petite build, strangely pale skin that doesn’t tan right in the sun (It just burns really badly.), delicate, well-proportioned features and a scattering of freckles across her cheeks from times where she stayed in the sun too long. Her hair is a short black (not brown/black or blue-black but just Black) pixie-styled mop of curls that fall around her face in a somewhat graceful fashion. Her eyes are almond shaped and grass green, usually displaying her every emotion (a fact she hates). Her usual outfit consists of dark skinny jeans, a- slightly too big- singlet top ( of whatever colour she feels like wearing that day), black leather gloves, her favourite pair of red converse sneakers, and some sort of dangling jewellery (usually necklaces).

Fears: Confined Spaces, Clowns and Spiders.

Dislikes: Confined spaces, clowns, mascots, spiders, snakes, waiting, being scared, being stuck inside, losing and abandonment.

Likes: Music, karate, dancing, winning, chocolate, the outdoors, travelling, meeting new people and trying new things and running (as in sprinting).

Personality: Iza is a very loud, vibrant girl that always has her own opinion about everything and isn’t afraid to speak her mind. She loves trying new things and meeting new people. She can be a little persistent for her own good and once she comes to a decision she won’t easily change it. She loves the outdoors and sees it as a way of freedom, always hating to be caged up or stuck anywhere. She has a brilliant sense of humour and an indefinitely loyal streak that sticks with her at all times. She will do anything for her family of friends but isn’t the self-sacrificing type although she can be very brave.

Short Bio: Iza’s mother died when she was three, so she doesn’t remember her all that much. She grew up in the suburbs with her father and has always been home-schooled as they were constantly moving around as part of her father’s job. Since a young age she has been getting self-defence training (she loved it) and practised it every day. When she was 15 her dad finally decided to settle down in a small town (where her dad’s new girlfriend lived). A year later Iza got a job in a recreational park there as a tour guide and finally started normal school. The trip to the hotel was a bit of a holiday for her as her father didn’t have enough money for both of them and he felt that Iza deserved a break on her own for once.

Occupation: She’s technically still a student but she does have a part time job as a tour guide.

Up for Love: Yes.

Name: Teddy

Gender: Male

Age: 18 years old

Appearance: Teddy is preety tall with golden brown hair that he's died white blonde three times but has went back to its normal colour.
he likes to wear contacts so he usually has dark blue cat like eyes.
You can always see him wearing board shorts and no shirt.
He almost never wears jeans.

Dislikes: bullies,dark chocolate and watching sports.

Likes: watching scary movies, (and other movies) and having fun.

Personality: Teddy is a fun guy to hang around.
He always is nice and kind.

Short Bio: Teddy grew up in an orphanage and he never knew his birth parents. When he turned 15 he started his own business called “MaxiMovie”.
It later became so popular that he became a millionare for it.
He's met all the famous people, before coming to stay at Hotel de scar he was in the gym , and as a result has a 6 pack etc... .

Occupation: he owns his own business called "MaxiMovie".

Up for Love: Yes. He is straight.

Name: Sunny Joule

Gender: Female

Age: 19

Appearance: Sunny stands at five feet eight inches, and has a toned, athletic build. Her skin is evenly tanned, except for very light sock lines at her ankles. She has bright green eyes and golden hair, which she usually keeps in a ponytail or a sloppy bun. She typically wears flare jeans, denim or cargo shorts, or track shorts, with tees, button-up shirts, or tank tops, with sandals or her running shoes. She usually doesn't wear jewelry, but she'll occasionally wear her meteorite necklace.

Fears: Falling, surgery, the dentist

Dislikes: Falling, surgery, dentists, being stuck in huge crowds, tone-deaf people, hurting herself in dumb ways, sitting next to fat businessmen on airplanes

Likes: Music, distance running, martial arts, playing gigs, good food, extreme sports/activities (hang gliding, sky diving, etc.)

Personality: Sunny is happy, eager, and enthusiastic. She'll make friends with virtually anyone, and she's good at cheering people up. She's outspoken, and while this sometimes annoys people, she often uses this talent to help out her friends. She's stubborn and persistent, with herself as well as others, and will rarely give up on anything. She's competitive, and she loves sports--she can usually be found either running/playing, or watching sports on TV. In addition to her distance running, she has a talent for music, which she puts to use in her band. Most of the time, she likes to crack jokes and keep the atmosphere light, but deep down, she cares a lot about her friends, more than she admits to them. She's loyal to a fault, and will do anything for her friends.

Short Bio: Sunny's parents, both scientists, died in a lab fire shortly after she was born. She was adopted by her father's research partner, a chemist at Caltech, and lived with him and his family in suburban California. Her adoptive parents treated her like their own child, and their daughter, Myra, sees Sunny as a sister. Sunny discovered her musical talent at a young age. She took voice and piano lessons for almost ten years, and then began experimenting on her own. She ran distance races and took martial arts lessons throughout her childhood, but toward the end of high school, she started focusing more on her music. She formed her band, the Globetrotters, with her high school friends Shaun Keats, Nick Todd, and Ian Fleming. They recently signed a record deal, and are working on their first album. Between composing and recording, Sunny went to college, to begin work on her astronomy degree.

Occupation: Student - astronomy, and the lead singer/pianist for her band, the Globetrotters.

Up for Love: Yep.

Name: Net Torin

Gender: Female

Age: 16

Appearance: Light brown skin, waist-length, silky black hair, wide chocolate eyes, chubby-ish cheeks, small lips, short (like 5 "2"), thin enough to be called average, she usually likes to wear skirts and button-up shirts, but for this trip, switched to miniskirts along with tights and really loose shirts. And her favourite pair of comfortable converses.

Fears: Enclosed spaces, bad hair, her mom,when she goes all nuts. ^u^

Dislikes: Being alone, snakes, cheesy romance movies, Brussel sprouts.

Likes: Reading on miscellaneous topics/articles, her favourite being on occult stuff. Chips, drawing manga, and a guy called Drew. And debating.

Personality: She's withdrawn at times, but other times, quite chatty. She's nice, kind, shy, slightly athletic, but mostly engrossed in books, books, galore! Despite her shy nature, she is always making jokes, giving, loyal, and quite naive. Due to her liking paranormal stuff, people sometimes label her as "creepy" (in a jokey kind of way) whenever she talks about that. (Keep in mind, she's kind of a baby, and everyone likes her immediately.)

Short Bio: Net's name comes from the Egyptian god, something her Egyptian parents thought a blessing. Her parents are antique collectors/book shop owners, and have friends and family from all over, so her parents farm house is always packed on Christmas. (There's nothing more to tell, really. She leads quite a normal family life.) No siblings. She also has had regular fencing/sword-fighting lessons privately. And she's quite good.

Occupation: High school student.

Up for Love: YES!!!! ESPECIALLY DREW!!!! <33333 (Pft...teenagers.)

I want to join!!!

Can I reserve a spot? Possibly?

It sounds really cool.

Hey, When is this starting?

Name: Kaiden O’Caine

Gender: Male

Age: 19 years old

Appearance: Kaiden is around 5ft 9” with an athletically compound build (but not overly muscular), lightly tanned skin with freckles scattered over his cheeks and shaggy dark brown hair. His eyes are a warm chocolate brown colour, his features are all set straight on his face and he has a small scar stretching from the top of his eye to the bottom of his nose. He’s ‘good looking ‘in a certain sense but he’s not overly handsome. His usual outfit consists of jean shorts, some sort of brightly coloured shirt and grey converse sneakers. On cooler days he will wear loosely comfortable jeans, some sort of tee shirt with a slogan, his converse sneakers and his favourite worn black faux leather coat.

Fears: Snakes and Dying.

Dislikes: Silence, Chick Flicks, Not being involved in something, having to make really hard decisions, losing, stuffing stuff up, death and snakes.
Likes: Music, playing guitar, acting, playing sports, easy- going people, Having Choices, living, most animals, trying new things, meeting new people and having fun.

Personality: Kaiden is not very good when it comes to first impressions. When he first meets somebody he does generally mean well but has a certain habit of putting his foot in his mouth and stuffing stuff up. Apart from that he is a very smart boy with a pretty great sense of humour that he somehow manages to keep even in the darkest times. By nature he is very competitive but no matter what the situation he is extremely loyal to his friends, family and teammates. Kaiden loves trying new things and is often laughing. He tends to think the best of people to begin with but once somebody gets on his bad side then that is usually where they will stay (unless something drastic happens…) He’s kind of shy and (extra) nervous around girls he doesn’t know and finds it difficult to think of what to say but once he begins to get to know someone (and’ like’ them) he can be really cute and romantic.

Short Bio: Kaiden grew up with both of his parents, his little sister (Jaime- she’s 8 years old)) and his older brother (Daniel - he’s 21 years old) in a small rural town. When he was little he wanted to either be a doctor or an actor and still wouldn’t mind being either but sine the closest half decent med- school was a LONG way away (and he’d probably only get to see his family once a year) he decided just to stick with the second one (an actor) and still do every first aid course he could. Since he was 7 he has been getting guitar lessons for fun but by now he is actually really good. He loves sports- especially soccer, hockey, running, swimming, kick- boxing and a little bit of tai- Kwan do. The trip to the hotel was just a little trip for him during the holidays so that he’d have time to think before he had to go back to school.

Occupation: Studen along with being a part time Actor and Guitarist

Up for Love: Yes. He’s straight.

Will we be starting anytime soon, because I really want to!?!

Yeah, I was so looking forward to this.

I hope this isn't too late...

Name: Nathan Rutledge

Gender: Male

Age: 25

Fears: Abandonment, being ridiculed, being trapped, losing control

Dislikes: Social situations, public speaking, overly emotional people, losing control, physical activity, stuttering, being laughed at, being responsible, people who try to talk to him when he obviously doesn't want to associate with them

Likes: Video games, folk music, funk rock, ear buds, computers, technology of all kinds, air conditioning

Personality: Nathan is a geek. He has always been a geek and will never change. Because of his permanent placement in the geek-dom, he doesn't do face to face interaction very well. Online he's a rockstar though. He doesn't like talking to people anyway, avoids it. He's really smart but has a mean streak. If he knows how to upset or embarrass you he will. He hasn't really grown up at all. He's just as good as a lazy, insolent teenager. If you can actually get an emotional reaction out of him it will be strong. Emotion for him often comes with a stutter. He often doesn't trust a person enough to reveal his true self which is quite a bit better than the shell he lets the world see. He feels they're either going to leave or mock him. He's actually quite observant and can see when someone is about to go over the edge. If he cares about you (which isn't likely) he'll try to make you feel better in a quiet way.

Short Bio: Nathan is from a broken home. He stayed with his mother after the divorce which was finalized when he was eight. He had to overcome an awful stutter which took a long time. By the time he finally had control over his speech, he was too self-conscious to have any talent at conversation. He discovered the internet and has socially flourished there.

Occupation: Computer programmer / Video game designer

Up for Love: Sure; straight

So seriously, when are we starting!?

now.