Writing Olympics: Team Conjunction

Just stopping by. Missed the join a team deadline... didn't think anyone would want me on their team anyway.

Hey! Don't be like that. As a whole community, we shall always welcome you in wide arms and smiles. Some, more or less. But hey, you've a good writing style. Don't be so down. Would've loved to have you on the Team; we've a lack of many members but we still care. Well, I'm speaking for Stella where she may have her own opinion, but I feel very strongly about this. D8< !

Perhaps when another 4 years pass and we've another Olympics or some other cool occasion, we shall all unite once more! I would look forward to that! Sincerely. We could be a Team in spirit, which is something that I wouldn't mind, really. 8D

The team's low on members so if you want to jump on board, I can make an exception ^^

Huzzah! I'd love to be on your team, in spirit or otherwise. If an exception is made, well that would just rock my socks!

8D Let there be joyous celebration!

On a side note, Stella! Loved the entry! There were a few grammar mistakes, but it's still a good story. I take it that she killed the father who probably came back eventually before she died?

YAYAY!!!! We have a new team member. Welcome on board! We would've definetly wanted you and with Rydia's permission is awesome.

Darn, I didn't make that clear. I meant to make it frozen as in frozen as an ice cube. Mama killed him before when the narrator was young and the mom kept him in the freezer all those years. She'd been expirementing on human bodies and that's why she kept letting go and that was in the food. SMH don't type anything up at 1am. The word count aslso hindered me. Alas.

YOU WON GOLD FOR THE PIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY VICTORY FOR SOMETHING!!!!!!!

I think I'll do image 2 or 8. You guys?

Advanced technology would be required to freeze the father's head, and how would she have gotten away with it for all those years? o_0 Sorry, just trying to play some reality in the sense, I suppose. Maybe she planned on tracking him down, and so she began experimenting in little hopes that she'll one day find him and then kill him. Maybe after all of those years, he came back to apologize and try to make things anew, and she killed him like that. /shrugs. I don't know. But we may be making it a lot more complicated than it should be. o-o

And oh, I did?

Spoiler

Images 5 or 2 caught my attention, been leaning toward Image 5. But oh, the possibilities. :B

Congrats on the gold! You shall soon have more shiny stuff than Tiffany's.

I was going to do image 1. I had my story half written, left, came back 3 hours later and it was gone. NOOO!!!! *falls to knees and screams at sky*

UPDATE: Just rewrote my story. 500 words exactly! I shall now jump into the air victoriously with a fist pump.

Thank you. Though, who would be Tiffany?

But your entry! Just read it, and I cannot explain the rush of ALL OF THESE feelings that is going through me right now. *-*

Spoiler

It is a gloriously awesome piece. Just the "Im" part of where Mandy is speaking with John after the judge grants custody over to him from her, is probably the only grammar mistake. Very emotional; very awesome. I shall now go start on my own entry.. /skips away!

Tiffany & Co. (known colloquially as Tiffany or Tiffany's) is a luxury American multinational jewelry and silverware corporation with headquarters in New York City. Tiffany's sells jewelry, sterling silver, china, crystal, stationary, fragerences, personal accesseries, as well as some leather goods. Many of these goods are sold under the Tiffany name at Tiffany stores through direct mail and corporate merchandising. Goods are also sold wholesale through third party distributors. Tiffany is renowned for its luxury goods, especially for its diamonds: diamond jewelry and especially its diamond engagement rings. Tiffany markets itself as an arbeiter of taste and style. - From Wikipedia

Off topic...

ANYWAY-
Thank you! I will fix that grammar mistake left away. (I'm tired of right away.) I wait in eager anticipation for yours!

Ohhh. That makes some sense. XD
And I like the way you think! Left away.. Huh. Has anyone actually coin that saying yet? It's quite cute.

And I have, officially as of now! It's a song. I'm tempted to post a video of me actually singing it so people would understand the beat, since this'll be the first time that I've actually finished writing a song.. Song-writing isn't really my forte. I get awkward in it's flow. But I'm not that great of a singer. So. /shrugs.

Read it and loved it (Woah, great discription right?), although I won't be much help when it comes to reviewing. I can't songwrite or really write poetry myself and I find it difficult to do anything reviewish. The only thing I spotted was tiny. In the first line I think come would work better than came. Other than that...
*Cricket sound, cricket sound*
Great job! If I had virtual thumbs I would be giving you three thumbs up. (Because if they're virtual, why stop at two?)

XD Thanks! I think that the first line's fine, since it's surrounded by past tense. But I slightly edited it actually. Added in a stanza that they found the bodies of the lovers by the train tracks. Give it some actual story! And horrah for the thumbs! .. You know, I eat thumbs, right? (Don't worry, I'm sure that your thumbs are safe.. for now.)