I would get to rest of the basics at a more appropriate time though. I'll take it back later to boil with the rest. This will help us become closer.. it always felt much more intimate. I'll tell her, about it. What I do, I mean. Eventually. When it comes to it. She doesn't have to know. It's not exactly a secret.
Keep that in mind as you're thinking on what to write. I like the idea of a mysterious fat widow who's sort of.. desperate, though. I suppose. Gives something to really say, "whhatt?" Or go for something, like a homeless man who's going through trash, and have us reader feel deep, painful sympathy! Maybe his homeless neighbor has something valuable that the persona is willing to steal from his neighbor! What if they are on good friend terms? What if the persona is jealous of his neighbor's possessions, and tries to lie to feel just as important?! So many possibilities! As long as it's interesting~ 8D Like Nora the scumbag-boyfriend killer. (; If it were a poem, it might be funny. Like a modern witches' tale of eating little children. XD I suppose? Just make sure that you really tie it in with the neighbor's garbage thing. 
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