Hi Noelle, I would love for you to review my piece The Rather Odd Adventures of Daisy: Volume 1. It is a short story, kinda, it is a poem, kinda, it is for children but not really, I dont know... Review please. I would be ever in your debt. Thanks. http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97126
Hey Noelle, remember you reviewed the story about the 'hypothetically' dead man. Well, I have written another one of it. would you please take a look at it.
Thanks for the quick reply to my PM. I'm requesting a review for Ch.6. It's in two parts because it's a little long (5,000+ words). So I guess that means I'm technically requesting 2 reviews... More points for you right? Here they are:
I hope it will be straightforward and not too confusing to just jump into the middle of the story. Whenever you have time to get around to it of course. I'll be patient and wait.
Thanks in advance.
When I was young I used to have problems finishing my sentences, but now I
You'd better wise up, Pony... you get tough like me and you don't get hurt. You look out for yourself and nothing can touch you, man. — Dallas Winston, The Outsiders
