Living Dolls- Starting

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Okay so I’ve had this idea for a story for a while but just recently I realised it would probably make a storybook then an actual story.
Here’s My Idea.


Plot

Theodore Marexon was a society shunned scientist obsessed with the idea of creating life out of minimum materials and a rare chemical formula that he made himself,(Think Frankenstein but modern) and for 12 years has been experimenting with very little to no success… Until now.
Finally after 12 years of research Theodore has found the perfect solution to the chemical formula able to contain new life.
Thus the living ‘dolls’ were born er… created.
In the time of only a few months Theodore created 8 life-sized dolls (four boys and four girls) - each unique in their own way with the ability to walk and talk to the standard of humans (or above.) with an IQ to match.
To top it all off, each ‘doll’ has their own special ‘gift.’ (Basically a talent.)
Then the day when Theodore was about to show off his ‘dolls’ to the public and reap the rewards of what all his hard work had brought when his precious chemical formula (that he was planning to present along with the dolls,) was stolen.
Suddenly (without constant doses of the special serum) the dolls began to possess the one thing they were never supposed to have. (Because it could turn out to be their greatest downfall.)
Suddenly the dolls possessed emotions.

Where you come in.

Spoiler
You wake up in a strange lab-like room (that seems vaguely familiar.) with absolutely no memory of how you got their or what happened ‘before.’
Then you meet ‘The Creator’ (who you do remember.) and he informs you of your current situation.
Then he tells you what has to be done (what you must do as you can fit into the crowd better than he.)

You will have to:
• Find the formula and return it safely to the LAB.
• Deal with the culprit.
• Return to the LAB.

However this may not be as easy as it seems as this entire mission must be completed in utter secrecy. If anyone finds out about you before the time the ‘Government’ (who are scared of what you could mean for the world) or the other scientists will have you killed.
So blend in and stay anonymous (as possible.)


Oh and, Good Luck. (You’ll need it.)

Character Profile


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Name: (Just note that characters don’t have last names; or if they do they will be fake and changed on a regular basis.)

Age: (13-18)

Gender:
(4 girls and 4 boys.)

Appearance: (they all look ‘good’ but each doll has their own unique ‘look’ and style.)

Personality:

( history- they were created not long ago and can’t remember anything anyway.)

Gift:

Other: (Up for Love, Any fears they may have anything else.)


Rules


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No excessive swearing
• No killing other characters
• Have fun


Positions

Dolls- These are the main narrators behind the story. (4 boys and 4 girls.)
F- Jane- Ipod
M- Aster- SidereaAquila
F- Zoe-SassBideAndRawr
M-Peter- LunaHalfLacy
F-Raven -xXmusicaXx
M- Maximillion- UpAndOut15
F-Lilliana-KRose
M-Alex- MeggieSmeggie
F- Karrina- DestinyxFate

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My Profile

Spoiler
Name: Krista Marexon

Age: 19 years old

Gender: Female

Appearance: Krista has a tall, lanky build and cropped white blonde hair that contrasts oddly with her brown eyes. Her skin is tanned and she feels more comfortable in a lab coat then jeans.

Personality: Krista tends to come off as a quiet, reserved and even shy (which she isn’t) person. She usually stands back and watches what is happening around her before stating her own opinion and is very smart. She will do anything to help her father get the formula back.

History: Krista is Theodore Marexon’s only child and has grown up watching his experiments either fail or get turned down. She was only of the only people who knew about the dolls and even helped her father design some of them. She goes with the dolls when they are looking for the formula- helping them to blend into the crowd and also organizing accommodation for them.
She is one of the only people who knows what the formula looks like. (Along with her father and the thief.

Other: Not up for Love.


Also here is a link to the DT- http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=200&t=94390
Ask all questions there.
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Name: Jane

Age: 18
Gender: Female

Appearance: her hair goes to her waist and its light brown , her eyes are crystal blue , she will wear dresses with high heels , her skin is light tan.

Personality: she is fun –loving she cares for everything although don’t let her fool you she can become nasty in a few seconds.

( history- they were created not long ago and can’t remember anything anyway.)

Gift: she has a photographic memory and knows when someone is there watching her.

Other: she likes guys who are younger then her , she has no fears (that she knows of yet)
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Name: Aster
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Appearance: Aster is about average height, and has an athletic build. He has pale skin and a stately face, and black hair that he combs back out of the way. His eyes are pale amber. He wears nice jeans, tennis shoes, and dark track or fleece jackets. His face isn't very expressive, which makes him hard to read.
Personality: Aster is calm and collected, and almost never panics. He's very analytical, and works through everything as if it was a math problem. He tends to keep to himself, speaking only when necessary, so he is one of the least "human" of the dolls. He's a good actor, though, and can figure out how to do almost anything he's asked to. Because of his scientific nature, he has trouble figuring out his newfound emotions, and can get very awkward at times.
Gift: Extreme intelligence. Aster has a great memory, is a brilliant problem-solver, and can calculate almost anything, at twice the speed of a normal human.
Other: Aster can usually ignore his emotions, but if they're too strong, he'll become paralyzed with indecision. Up for love, but only if the girl makes the first move (he'll most likely be too confused by his emotions to know what's going on).
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Okay.

Your both in.
EVERY DAY MIGHT NOT BE GOOD...
BUT THERE IS SOMETHING GOOD IN EVERY DAY.


Don't be sorry your darkness is gone. I'll carry it for you.
Always. I'll keep it with mine.


Gotta catch em all!




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I would like a female please (:




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May I reserve a male, please?
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What about your profile, ToBeMe?


Name: Raven
Age: 17
Gender: Female

Appearance:
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Personality: Raven is the hard rocker chick of the group. She has a conscience, and so would never do anything wrong, though. Besides, she loves the other dolls too much. However, she has a twisted personality, which makes her unique among the dolls in the sense that she's the only one who enjoys killing. She has a hard-hitting, never-say-die attitude, and a slightly cynical outlook to life. However, she generally keeps her opinion to herself, and is always ready for an adventure, never fearing anything. She likes to take risks and take a chance, and isn't afraid to offer others a second chance either.

Gift: Ambidextrous, with a talent for killing. She prefers to use automatics (guns, of course). However, she also knows how to use poison for silent killing and she can be a very dangerous enemy.

Other:
Up for love: Yes, but she's going to put up a serious fight.
Fears: Probably only falling in love, or opening up to someone.
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Reserving girl... Will have profile up later...
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Name: Lilliana (Lil, or Lily)
Age: 16
Gender: female
Appearance:
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She has light brown hair, and is over all beautiful. She wears anything, and anything she wears makes her look pretty. She has long eyelashes, and full red lips. Also, her eyes are a pretty blue, and she has a perfect tan. (Doesn't wear sunglasses like in pic)

Personality: She is very self-confident. Although she is quiet, people can’t help staring at her, because she’s really pretty. She has a natural talent for talking persuasively, and usually gets what she wants. It’s almost impossible to refuse her anything. She has never flirted, but I’m sure she’d be great at it. She is very independent, but she likes working in a team. She, (like Aster), is not accustom to her new emotions yet. She is very cocky at times.
Gift: As I said above, she is very good at talking persuasively. She can think up a speech in a second. She never stutters, and always knows what to say in awkward moments. She is never at a loss for words.

Other:
She usually doesn’t think of serious love, but since she is so extremely pretty, guys are naturally attracted. She can’t help being beautiful, right?
Fears: She’s afraid that a wrong kind of guy will like her. She is afraid of over-talking, but usually bites her tongue just in time…
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enjoyinginsanity and LunaHalfLacy- your both in. (or will be once you get your profile's up.)

xXmusicaXx - I will probably just play the roll of the scientist or if there is a spot left as a doll later on then that.
As for age, well it kind of just means how old they look.
Anyway your profile was Epic.
Your in.

KRose- Your in as well.
:)

To anyone else who may join there are only 2 male spots left.


Enjoy.
EVERY DAY MIGHT NOT BE GOOD...
BUT THERE IS SOMETHING GOOD IN EVERY DAY.


Don't be sorry your darkness is gone. I'll carry it for you.
Always. I'll keep it with mine.


Gotta catch em all!




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Thank you. :)
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"I shall futterwacken vigorously"
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ToBeMe have you got any starting date in mind??
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I'll reserve one of the last male slots. I'll have my profile up in the next day or so.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
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I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
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omg its allan the one whos with the male vampire!! ^^^^
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ToBeMe - when is this starting, To?
"Married to music - 'nuff said."
"Freedom is everything to me."

"Have you any idea why a raven is like a writing desk?"
"I shall futterwacken vigorously"
~ Tarrant Hightop, Alice in Wonderland.



There are darknesses in life and there are lights, and you are one of the lights, the light of all lights.
— Bram Stoker