The Cruelty Challenge (Accepting)

92 posts1, 2, 3, 4, 5 ... 7
User avatar
Gender None specified
Points 300
Reviews 0
By the way, KRose is helping. She had part of the idea. What she says goes!
“Hey.” Says a very sour-looking man. He grabs you, and drags you out of your dark prison pit. Your skin is as white as it was when you were born, you’ve never been out of that pit, and you’ve never eaten well. You can’t resist him, you’re too weak. You’ve never gotten anything you’ve wanted, and you don’t know what friendship is. “You are going to go to The Office.” You see five other kids in The Office. They are all the same as you. Very light colored, poorly dressed, and just skin and bones. Some of the girls still look nice, but still are oddly thin. You are afraid. What will they do to you?
Spoiler
You, along with five other kids, are going on a “Bravery Challenge,” also known as “The Cruelty Challenge.” You will be taken to many places, and will see many people. The Office wants to make you mean, and cruel like them. In some cases, they will want you to be plain cruel, or they will force you to steal, or be rude to people. What you don’t know is that they have planted a chip in your neck, making it that if you do something wrong, they can kill you in a second. You have flashing pains, and never are sure of yourself. The question is, will you survive? Will you be cruel? Or will you rebel, and try to free yourself?

Spoiler
Your parents were all special spies. Suddenly, The Office took power of the government, and killed most of the spies. They will kill you too, if you aren’t careful. Basically they want you to become harsh and mean so that you can become a member of The Office. There are three options, be obedient to them, die, or rebel. It’s your choice…

Here's the prison that you've lived in since you could remember. You have never been outside, and not very much light gets in:
Spoiler
Image

Character application:
Spoiler
Name:
Appearance:
Age:
Gender:
(No history. All of their history has been in the "Pit".)
Talent:
Personality:

Slots:
Spoiler
So, basically, there are going to be six youth. Three girls, Three boys. They are all frail, but they can still be nice looking.
Boys
1.
2.
3.
Girls
1.
2.
3.
Also, I want a main assistant. Up to two. The main assistant will have to be in contact with me, as in PM's. We will have all these cool things going on.

RULES
No cursing
No sex scenes
No "super-powers"
No killing anyone without my consent
All the normal YWS rules
Last edited by martina100ters on Tue Aug 07, 2012 3:20 pm, edited 2 times in total.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1308
Reviews 5
I must say this looks interesting. If you complete the post and provide a little more background info like the slots, I'd love to join. When should I post my profile?
"Married to music - 'nuff said."
"Freedom is everything to me."

"Have you any idea why a raven is like a writing desk?"
"I shall futterwacken vigorously"
~ Tarrant Hightop, Alice in Wonderland.




User avatar
Gender None specified
Points 300
Reviews 0
If you could, try to get it in soon :D




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1308
Reviews 5
Sure. Maybe by tonight. :)
"Married to music - 'nuff said."
"Freedom is everything to me."

"Have you any idea why a raven is like a writing desk?"
"I shall futterwacken vigorously"
~ Tarrant Hightop, Alice in Wonderland.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1144
Reviews 51
I'd love to join if I still can!

Name: Kyler Greythorn

Age: 17

Gender: male

Appearance: Kyler has ruff brown hair with brillant green eyes. He's just under six feet tall and, of course, skinny and pale.

Talent: Kyler's good at planning and thinking ahead. He's clever.

Personality: Kyler's rebellious in his heart, but he likes to plan things out. He's very logical. He doesn't base actions on emotions. He's quiet, and when he talks, his sentences are short and to the point. He'll joke around occasionally, but most of the time, he's serious.

I hope this is okay! :D I hope more people join so we can start. This is an amazing idea!
I'm the author of my own life. Unfortunately I'm writing in pen. Mistakes I make can not be erased, the only option is to turn the page and start a new chapter. <3

I'm single because God is busy writing the best love story.
<3 VuzzyCat




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 822
Reviews 50
Would love to join! Here's my character profile:

Name: Tabbitha Jennings
Appearance: long, curly, somewhat matted brown hair, grey-blue eyes, 5'7", pale, thin, somewhat muscular/athletic build(not much to do but push-ups and cruches in the cells), straight, narrow nose, square-ish face
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Talent: stays under the radar, good with throwing-knives and hand-to-hand combat, sneaky, good actor
Personality: sarcastic, cautious, hard- shelled, doesn't trust anyone (at first), rebellious (secretly), kind
"Look out! He's got a daisy!"
- Making Money by Terry Pratchett

Chuck Norris- worshiping gnomes, undead pandas, pet chupacabras and undead Keanu Reeves-what could possibly go wrong?




User avatar
Gender None specified
Points 358
Reviews 67
Name: Auburn Snow

Appearance: Auburn has long mahogany hair with deep gray eyes with blue flecks in them, a pretty character.

Age: 17

Gender: Female

(No history. All of their history has been in the "Pit".)

Talent: Auburn has natural skill with any weapon but her favorite is the double edged sabre.

Personality: Auburn is resourceful and extremely smart although she tries not to show it. She has a fierce fighting personality with a brutally cold side to her that nobody wants to see. Most of the time she is quiet and keeps to herself though.
Last edited by cm57105 on Fri Aug 17, 2012 7:11 am, edited 1 time in total.
If you don't have a trophy case that spins into a secret room with a press of a button, then your an idiot.

Need a review? You've come to the right person.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&p=1143828#p1143828




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 822
Reviews 50
Hey. By the way, when are we going to start up anyway?
"Look out! He's got a daisy!"
- Making Money by Terry Pratchett

Chuck Norris- worshiping gnomes, undead pandas, pet chupacabras and undead Keanu Reeves-what could possibly go wrong?




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 495
Reviews 49
OOOH GIRL PLEASE! I LIKE CAPS LOCK.


Name: Mary Castro
Appearance: Has long straight black hair and deep black eyes. Had she never seen the sun, she would have most definetly have had very tan skin. She is short, and though she is quite thin and sallow, she is also very curvy. She has typical Italian looks.
Age: 19
Gender: Female
(No history. All of their history has been in the "Pit".)
Talent: She's very authorative when she wants to be, but is clever enough to get other people to do work for her. She is very good at hand to hand combat, and sleeps with hookswords on her back.
Personality: She is rude and abrupt, she doesn't lie to spare your feelings, though she is prone to manipulating people. She can be quite kind and sympathetic, convincing you that she actually cares, but most of the time she isn't even listening, just plotting the best way to take you down. She has a bit of a temper, which is ultimately her downfall.
Nella vita vi è la distruzione, desolazione nella morte, ma c'è speranza nella rivoluzione.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 822
Reviews 50
Hey. Wpn't be online for a few days. Won't be back til the 8th. Please don't start without me. Sorry!
"Look out! He's got a daisy!"
- Making Money by Terry Pratchett

Chuck Norris- worshiping gnomes, undead pandas, pet chupacabras and undead Keanu Reeves-what could possibly go wrong?




User avatar
Gender None specified
Points 358
Reviews 67
Hey we need more guys, there is only one!
If you don't have a trophy case that spins into a secret room with a press of a button, then your an idiot.

Need a review? You've come to the right person.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&p=1143828#p1143828




User avatar
Gender None specified
Points 300
Reviews 0
Hey guys. Im not going to be here for a while. I'm leaving KRose in charge for a while. Don't worry! I'll be back!




User avatar
Gender None specified
Points 1246
Reviews 16
Soooo, I've been given charge of this for just a week or so. Here are the slots that martina100ters hasn't entered yet.
Boys
1. Kyler Greythorn-VuzzyCat
2.
3.
Girls
1. Tabbitha Jennings-Pencil2paper
2. Auburn Snow-cm57105
3. Mary Castro-thestorygirl
When you really want to slap someone,do it and say "Mosquito!"




User avatar
Gender None specified
Points 1246
Reviews 16
Okay people!! We need two more guys. If any of you think you can handle two, that's fine. If not, we can't start until we get them. Hopefully we can start as soon as we get the guys.
When you really want to slap someone,do it and say "Mosquito!"




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 368
Reviews 43
Ok, I'll be a guy for you! I'll make a profile shortly. (If absolutely necessary I can be two brothers.) Edit: I guess it's not necessary.
Last edited by DragonGirl11 on Tue Aug 07, 2012 10:48 pm, edited 1 time in total.
~*~

"You could look at the raindrops on your window, or you could look through the window and see the rainbow."
~K.C. Oxford

<YWS>



What's the point of being a grown-up if you can't be a bit childish sometimes?
— 4th Doctor