Avatar (Reinventing)

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Your a young adult no more than fifteen year's old who was born into a world at war with itself, the five nation's fight for global control over other nation's and not only that you were born with the unlikely power to control the five element's. Fire, Water, Earth, Wind, and Thunder. You couldn't use these power's to any great extent originally, but come of age your control over becomes greater, allowing you to do some great feats unlike any other. At one point after a turning of tides in the war, your master who brought you to an isle with other's and is helping you learn on how to use your power offer's you an option to enhance your current power into something that could rival your master's power, these being Black Lighting, Blood, Storm, Blue Fire, and Quake. Two who could use all five elements are offered the chance to learn all five enhancement's. And become almost god-like with these enhancement's, your smarter than this you know something is wrong and there has to be a huge backlash to such given power. twelve other's were offered this, do you take the offer? or do you decline this offer knowing not of what could happen or what you could do with this power enhancement? Ladies and gentlemen, I welcome you to Avatar.

Plot:
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After the ceremony of those who choose the enhancement's your training goes on like any other, but the people that choose these enhancement's have been somehow altered themselves, like there not who they used to be. They act more sinister more shady then you used to remember them, now with this knowledge in mind you go out to seek the truth even tho your master does not approve if you do. Now you go on a journey with other's who see this to, to both uncover the truth's and save you're former friend's turned rival's.


Pupil's
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Avatar's
Male: Amos Bronzerune by RedFang18
Female: Rye Grayson by Upandout15
Thunder Wielder
Male: Chaucer Storm by Dragonette
Female: Gemini Lazarus by LHeart
Fire Wielder
Male:
Female: Arrah Su-on by Betheny
Water Wielder
Male: Lin Poke by ArahAkachi1
Female: Brooke West by PixieStix.
Wind Wielder
Male:
Female: Demi Whisperkan by Dragonette
Earth Wielder
Male: Mason Earthshaker by ItalianIlluminist
Female: Aralia Sage by xXmusicaXx


Character Template
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Name:
Gender: (Put M for Male F for Female
Age: (No younger than Fifteen no older than twenty)
Appearance: (Picture not needed but would help.)
Element:
Enhanced?: (Yes or no only please)
Reason for the enhancement: (This can vary from just about anything)
Personality:(Includes both weaknesses and strength's.)
Up for love?: (If yes, what orientation.)
Other: (This can have anything just nothing upsurd.)


Rules:
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- Usual YWS rules
- No sex. Romance is allowed, but don't go too far into detail about what happens. Most of the characters are younger teens...
- No excessive swearing. Every once and while is okay just please don't use it in every sentence.
- I am the creator, which means I am the boss. What I say, goes. If you have a problem/comment/question, PM me. Admin's will be chosen later.
- All non-SB posts must go in the DT. This is going to take a lot of discussion so I would like it if one is taking place at all times. You're working in teams, which means that you need to collaborate.
- No killing off other's character's without permission from both the creator and me.
- Most importantly, no godmodding, trolling, or stereotypical characters. Make things interesting.
And finally this is a permission and invite only SB. please send me the profiles to be via PM.


The DT:
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Name: Amos Bronzerune
Gender: M
Age: 20 (recently turned so)
Appearance:
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Element: All elements.
Enhanced?: No
Personality: Quiet at some degree, but not too quiet to be considered a mute. Secretive of his family life, but can be emotional at the sight of families around him. The second he sees a family, you could almost swear he appears heartbroken. Mostly seen with a straight face, but that's to hide his temper that could get in the way for his thinking. It's obvious that the sight of a family and his temper are his biggest weaknesses, but that doesn't come against his greatest strength which is loyalty and patience. He's loyal to those who make friends with him and often waits to hear both sides of the story before making a final judgement. This way of decision makes him a sage for a man his age. Although wise for his age, he's got a wild side that often involves Fire and Earth being used at night every now and then.
Up for love?: Oh yeah. Bisexual, but no one knows that except him.
Other: His history is a heartbreaker, even to himself. Will be revealed as the SB progresses.
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Since there's no Earth wielder yet, I'll take a female Earth wielder. I'll post my profile later tonight. And I'll definitely try to keep up, L. :D
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Name:Gemini Lazarus
Gender: F
Age: Eighteen
Appearance:
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Tall girl, wear's tight jean's, very low cut tank tops, and nikes. has black brunette hair and jet black eyes. And a bracelet from her father she never got to meet that read "Never back down, take on the world no matter how bad it maybe."
Element: Black Lightning
Enhanced?: Yes
Reason for the enhancement: She wanted to be powerful to show her father who she never got to meet that his little girl has grown to be someone that is truely powerful.
Personality: Used to be a kind and caring girl but the enhancement has given her a darker tone and more evil side to her, made her more reckless and uncaring. She makes great use of her ability over lightning, but generally loves being in the sky because of it, she hates earth bender's to most because she normally has no effect over them due to earth not conducting electricity. She has a soft spot for children and hurts badly if his by water.
Up for love?: Yes, Bisexual.
Other: wields a two handed blade she can use with one hand, it also acts like rod of sorts to help her redirect incoming lightning attacks. When she uses it for close quarter's battling she constantly charges it with her Black Lightning.
Her Two Handed Blade
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Name: Lin Poke
Gender: M
Age: 16
Appearance: Tall, Blue Hair, Red Eyes, carries a Katana that powers up his power.
Element: Water
Enhanced?: Yes
Reason for the enhancement: Lin was always the weakest Water Wielder. He got enhanced, and ended up having control over Blood. He eventually started to kill the people in his Clan, especially those who bullied him.
Personality: He has a quick temper, and doesn't think twice about killing. If he is on the verge of losing, he is pretty intelligent, and can find a way to win. He likes to see blood. He is cool to hang with, just don't make fun. His power constantly increases the more he is damaged. His weakness is hard, you have to say his name Backwards, and then strike the tattoo over his heart.
Up for love?: Yes
Other: He carries a katana that is across his back, the hilt above his left shoulder.
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Could I be allowed to reserve a female fire weilder? *looks all cute and hopeful* please.
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Just send in the profile to me.
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Will send in profile shortly, MM.
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I'm double sided
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I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
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Just PM me rocky don't worry bout the profile for right now.
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Okay...
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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It's sloppy, but in the makings.

Name: Rye Grayson

Gender: F

Age: 16

Appearance: Brown hair, grey eyes. Average height, 5'7'' maybe. Average build, not muscular but not overly skinny. Has a charcoal black hooded cloak (oh yeah) but only wears it when needed.
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Element: All.

Enhanced?: Yes.

Reason for the enhancement: As they say, the more power you get, the more hungry you get for it. (just wanted more)

Personality: (will develop more once posted, kind of eh at the moment) Not afraid to speak her mind, wise, overly protective of those close to her, leadership skills. Has a bit of a temper and sometimes hears voices, Conrad and Jaime, who are the two most annoying things on the planet to her.

Up for love?: Yes, straight.

Other: Along with the cloak, carries a pair of swords crafted out of crystal. The hilts are black based with a silver snake-like design wrapping around.
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I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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Will reserve the girl water wielder. :D
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Right.
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Here ya go:


Name: Brooke West

Gender: (Put M for Male F for Female): F

Age: (No younger than Fifteen no older than twenty): 16

Appearance: (Picture not needed but would help.): (I'll add a pic later.) Long brown hair, Ice blue eyes and is fair skinned. Her looks light up the room and she usually makes people stare.

http://favim.com/mini/201105/30/beautif ... -60496.jpg

Just imagine her skin more pale-ish.

Element: Water

Enhanced?: Nope.

Personality:(Includes both weaknesses and strength's.): Brooke is very open and mischievous. She has a side that only her partner has seen. She can be bossy and very ignorant when people tell her what to do. She is very smart, leaving almost anyone underestimating her. She is VERY athletic. She can climb well and can run for miles. She is very cunning. Her weaknesses are she can never be near fire or she has a panic attack, she likes to stay near her own element or she'll start to loose herself and she tends to freak out when people say she can't do anything
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Up for love?: (If yes, what orientation.) Yes, straight orientation.

Other: (This can have anything just nothing upsurd.)She usually wears a blue necklace that's shaped like a heart.
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Name: Demi Whisperkan

Gender: F

Age: 16

Appearance: Red head. Has lots of freckles. Hazel eyes. Normally wears loose, yellow clothes.
http://www.imdb.com/media/rm67744256/nm1297015

Element: Air

Enhanced?: No. Not yet anyways... >;)
Reason for the enhancement:

Personality: Demi is sweet and shy. She's normally cheery, but socially awkward. She normally has her nose stuck in a book or her head in the clouds, literally. She likes reading, writing, drawing, sitting in high places, animals and flying in her glider. She's good at meditating and is a vegetarian. And she is extremely flexible, like, weirdly so, it's like she has no bones. But she's not all that strong, her mind wanders a lot, and she's deaf.

Up for love?: Yeah, straight

Other: Important! Demi is deaf. She became deaf six years ago when she was fighting a thunder weilder. A deafening crash of thunder was thrown at her ear and it burst her ear drum. Now she communicates by signing and writing in a notebook that she keeps with her. But because she was hearing before, she knows how to read lips pretty well and her speech is understandable. (But I hope your character is ready to learn some sign-language! ;D).
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