The Random Vampire Story [2]

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Colt-

"Well, we can get some later, unless your really hungry?" He looked at her to see what her answer was.



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Caiden giggled, "I was just teasing you."

He faked an angry face and kissed her causing her to giggle more.


(Sorry I gotta go too)
I just lost the game.




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***:D*****


Colt-

Colt tickled her stomach as he kissed her causing her to squirm next to him. They ended up falling back laughing. He held her close never wanting this to end.




****all I had****
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(I love how we get it goin up to the point where it seems like its all going to CRASH down on top of them any moment. And I have a brillantly evil idea!)
I just lost the game.




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"OY!" Slade called from the house, "somethin's beepin!"

They stood up groaning and started back towards the house, just as they got to the kitchen, something exploded. They were all knocked back a good twenty feet, "killing" Caiden.
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****Hey, I have no time. We are stopped to get dinner, so ya.*****

Colt-

Colt flew back at the explosion. His head pounding, he had forgotten how bad stuff could hurt. He slowly stood up and looked around. "Caiden? CAIDEN!!!!"
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(we're going to have a bunch of slow posts for a tad because Caiden's kinda dead, so I'm just gonna go with the whole over-view of everyone and when that's a dud I'll take over Brenty ok?)

Colt rushed to Caiden's side and found her not breathing. He cursed loudly and picked her up, ordering one of the neighbors to call 911
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****Alrighty*****


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Colt rocked back and forth waiting for the ambulence to get there. He could hear them in the distance. SLowly stroking Caiden's hair he let tears roll down them. There was no pulse, not that he could feel, and sense that was true changing her back to a vampire wouldn't really work.
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Brent walked over to Colt and placed a hand on his shoulder, "fate's finally caught up with her," he said, trying to be reassuring, "no doubt fate will bring you together again someday."

He felt his shoulder shudder as the tears rolled down his face. Brent should have remembered to blow out the piolet in the oven, he dropped the damned match into the oven, that's probably what caused the explosion. Damnit, it was all his fault Caiden was dead.
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Colt-

Colt wanted to join her whereever she was right then and there. He didn't want to live without her, ever.

"The sooner the better then." He replied bitterly.
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Brent realized that Colt would have to be supervised, he loved Caiden too much to be without her long. When the ambulence came and loaded her up they wouldn't let Colt come along, Brent had to restrain him from punching one of them.

"We'll follow behind in her truck okay?"

He nodded grimly.
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Colt-

Colt slowly climbed in the tuck Brent getting in the drivers seat. He still wanted to tear that guys head off for not letting him stay with Caiden. He closed his eyes fighting tears that wanted to come out. He wanted to die, he wanted Caiden back. But that was impossible.
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When they got to the hospital Caiden was pronounced dead, Brent was sure she was at the house, but there was a shot. For a few moments afterwords Colt went catotonic, Slade and him practically had to carry him back to the truck. and from there back home to the couch.

Keeping a slight eye on him from the kitchen, Brent and Slade sat at the table silently crying for Caiden.
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Colt-

Colt looked around the house for anything that would relieve the pain. The emptiness of loosing Caiden. He slowly and silently stood up and walked to his room, their room. Tears rolled down his face as he burried his head in her pillow breathing in the smell left from her shampoo. He wanted to sufficate himself, kill himself, do anythign that would bring him to where she was. There was no bringing her to life, so he would need to go to her.
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*okay Caiden's gonna wake up in the hospital over in england now*
Caiden

"Are you alright ms?" a methocial voice from above her said, "that car really took the wind out of you."

"Car?" she groaned as she opened her eyes to bright lights above her.

"You were hit by a car."

"That's why I feel like I've died."

The man standing above her grinned. "What's your name?"

"Candy."

Brent

I let Colt bury his face in Caiden's pillow, he was crying and I doubted me interupting him would be good. Better to let him cry and stop him from doing anything rash than to stop him from crying and get myself killed, and him dying in the end. No, I'd let him cry.
I just lost the game.



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