The Random Vampire Story [2]

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Colt grabbed Caiden's wrist. "Let's get back to the house so I can change Slade, then we'll come back." He smiled, "Please."
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Caiden smiled, "alright."

Walking hand in hand they walked back to the cars and then drove home.
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When they got into the house Colt looked at Slade. "You ready for this or do you want to wait a little longer?"
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"I'm ready...is it painful?" Slade asked.

"Very," Colt said bluntly.

Caiden cringed.

"IF you don't wanna watch-"

"I'm going to take a shower."

Caiden went into the bathroom and showered and laid down in bed to take a nap.
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Slade swallowed, "Lets get this over with." He replied, Colt nodded and walked over to him. He bite his kneck and slowly started the process of changing him.

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When it was finnally done Colt left Slade asleep and he went in to see Caiden, when Slade woke up he would change him to a human. When he walked into her room she was gone!
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When Caiden woke up she was on her couch...wait...why was she on her couch? She was supposed to be at Slade's house!

She sat up only to be pushed back down. "Something's wrong with you," her boss said.

"No there's not."

"Yes there is, you're a human again."

"How is this wrong?"

"It shouldn't be able to happen."

"It was a wizard, now if I'm a human why did you kidnapp me?"

"We're going to figure out why."

She didn't think this was going to end well. Oh god was Colt alright? "Where's colt?"

"Back where you were."

She sighed, Colt was safe.
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Colt looked around for Caiden. He sniffed the air then walked back to the living room. "Brent, watch Slade, when he wakes up tell him go find something to drink." He ran out of the house and went looking for Caiden, where could she be?
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Caiden woke again a little later, this time with someone standing above her tying a rubber tube around her arm with a needle.

"Oh god," Caiden gasped.

"She's awake, should I hit her up with another 200 mg?"

"No, she should feel this."

Caiden gulped and screamed when a large needle broke the skin of her arm.
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Colt could feel pain, but it wasn't phisical, it was mental. They were hurting Caiden, his Caiden. He heard a scream close to Caiden's house and he ran towards it. He could smell her now, and her blood was pumped full of fear and pain. He was going to kill someone. He slammed into the front door a long 2x4 in his hands. He was going to do some serious damage.
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Caiden withered in pain unlike anything she could remember. This was worse than when the sun touched her with the Werewolves, worse than the hunger that gnawed at her when she had been buried alive.

She blacked out.

(I was gonna add a little more but I thought you might like to add the scene when he beats them all up)
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Colt's first victum was the watchmen at the door. Stupid guy wasn't even doing his job. Colt slammed the 2x4 into the guys stomach and then hit him hard in the head. He then moved towards where Caiden scent was the strongest. A guy stepped out of one of the rooms a gun in hand. He shot, Colt could feel the searing metal cut through his side, but he ignored it and slammed the guy against the wall witih the 2x4 knocking him out if not killing him. He kept going, Caiden was in pain, he picked up his pace and moved to the door she would be in. He kicked the door open but stepped to the side of it. A volly of bullets flew by, he kicked a shoe into the room and another volly of bullets flew. He jumped in hitting hte first guy hard on the head with the 2x4 then moving to the next.

Now it was just him and Caiden's boss, who was standing on the other side of the room with a gun. Colt kept walking towards him not fazed as the guy fired once. He jumped out of the way quickly and swung the 2x4 at him catching him in the arm. A satisfying crack sounded and the guy cried out in pain.

"That's for taking my girl," He hit him in the leg, "That's for hurting her." He hit him in the other leg. "That's for not taking my advice and staying away." He then hit him in his last unbroken limb, his arm. "And that is for trying to shoot me."

"A-aren't you g-goin to k-kill me?" The guy stuttered through pain.

"Not yet, I'll let you think on what you did. Maybe, that is a big maybe, I'll let you live, I doubt you'll ever come back though. If you survive." He slowly walked to where Caiden was and he touched her forehead. "Caiden, love, come on wake up." He bent down and stroked her hair kissing her forehead.


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Slowly Caiden felt awareness return to her body, she heard Colt's voice calling for her to wake, she opened her eyes and smiled. She tried to wrap her arms around him but she still lacked the ability to move her arms.

"Hello love," He breathed.

"Hi."
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Colt pulled Caiden into a hug and kissed her softly on the lips. "How do you feel? Are you ok? Did they hurt you bad?"

He could hear her boss moan behind him but he ignored it, if they guy tried anything he was going to end his life quickly.
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Caiden's eyes were dotted with black spots, "I feel dizzy," she said and fell back onto the couch. "They kept drawing blood, they were trying to figure out how I became human again." She started gasping, "I-I tried to tell-"

"Shhh," Colt said kissing her brow, "rest now."

With a sigh of content satisfaction Caiden fell back asleep. Peacefully this time.
I just lost the game.



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