The Random Vampire Story [2]

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Colt--

"Alright, I'll hear you out." He smiled, "Now we only have two hours, so get ready, meet me at my place." Colt couldn't help but smile.
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Brent

"Colt," he said, "Your place is trashed, most of your stuff is here."

HE looked at him quizzicly.

"I'll explain later. Just come inside."
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Colt--

Colt nodded and walked into the house. "Maybe there is something you should tell me about my place. Why is it trashed, I'll go get vampire Brent to help me find the ones that did it. Oh and why aren't I a vampire anymore?"
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Brent

"Werewolves and Brent the vampire."

"What?"

Brent suddenly didn't want to explain it, he wanted Colt to just know. "I'll tell you a little bit at a time."

"Whatever, I'm going to take a shower."
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Colt--

"Alright, let me show you where the guest room is." Brent sighed walking him to another room. Colt walked to the bathroom and took a shower. He let the warm water wash over his body and he sighed. This day was going pretty good other then that crazy girl. Who did she think he was? When he got out of the shower he brushed his ahir trying to figure out a good way to style it.
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Caiden

Her mind was made up, she knew she had lost him for good. When they left. She was going to kill herself.

She only hoped that Brent and Slade and Jason would understand...

Brent

When the two hours were up, we went to the coffee house, just me and Colt, to meet that girl. He made Jason and Slade stay behind to watch after Caiden.
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Colt--

Colt looked around and spotted her smiling. He walked over to the table and smiled sitting down next to her.

"Brent this is Adriana, Adriana this is Brent."



Jason---

Jason frowned, "Caiden still hasn't come out." He told Slade.
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Adriana

Love at first sight. I looked at Brent, my eyes wide, and he looked at me, the same lovesick expression on his face, only more hidden.

Caiden

I was going to do this the right way. I pulled out a paper and wrote a note.

Farewell my friends. I'll see you on the other side. Life is pointless without him. But do not pretend I didnt care about you guys too. I would have loved it if you could have made it better. I love you guys,
Caiden.


With that placed nicely in front of the door she went into the bathroom and found what she was looking for, a pair of scissors.
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Colt--

Colt looked at the two. Oh no, oh no no no! He hissed in his mind.



Jason--

"Let's break in." Slade said, Jason nodded and they busted hte door down. Jason saw Caiden standing in the bathroom a pair of sissors in her hand, tears running down her cheeks. He ran towards her.

"NO! Stop!" He yelled grabbing her hand.

"Yes, I can't live without him!" She cried. Slade frowned,

"Don't do anything drastic, I'm going to go fix his memory." He said leaving. He went to the witches house and knocked,

"What?" She demanded,

"I need you to reverse the spell." He said,

"Figured, it'll wear off in a few minutes." She replied,

"You knew!" He demanded,

"I know true love when I see it." She replied slamming the door in his face. He smiled and walked towards the airport he would be out of there lives once and for all.


Colt--

Colt was about to say something when his head started to pound. He frowned and everythign went black when we woke up memories flashed before his eyes.

"Are you ok?" Brent asked,

"Ya, I have to go find Caiden." He said jumping up and running all the way to the house.
***Mwahahahahahaha, hopes this works. If not tell me.******
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*yes it works ^_^ she's still gonna do it though*
Caiden

She waited until Jason had ran out and Slade had followed him out before she did it. She used the sharp points to cut both of her wrists. She swayed for a few minutes before she collappsed, only vaguely aware of someone shouting out her name in agony.
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Colt---


Colt ran into the house and to their room. He saw her laying on the floor! "CAIDEN!!! NO!!!" He ran to her side and looked her over. ""Why!" He ran out. "SLADE!!! Slade get in here NOW!!"

Slade ran in, "Wh-Caiden!"

"Can you help her? Please." Colt begged.
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Caiden

Her gaze lost focus a couple times. "Colt?" she gasped.

"I'm here honey I'm here."

"Y-you remember me?"

He kissed her forehead, "yes love, I remember you."

She groaned, "now I feel stupid." Her gaze blackened and her breathing became labored.

"No!" Colt shouted, "Caiden love don't leave me, please no, don't leave me. I can't take it, not again."

"I don-"
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Colt--

Colt heard an ambulence outside and he picked her up running towards the sound. "Stay with me love. Please please stay with me. Don't die, just don't die." He cried. Workers took her from his hands and carried her to the ambulance.

"I'm coming with you." He said getting in. He dared any of them to tell him otherwise. They didn't though as they worked on getting her blood and taking care fo teh cuts.
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Caiden

She moaned, "Colt," she whined he came into view. "Please don't leave me."

He touched her face, "I won't. I swear."

A content smile came across her face before she fell into blackness.
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Colt---

Colt wanted to yell. "How is she?" He demanded of the two workers.

"WE're workin on it sir. Anything health wise we should know about?" One asked,

"SHe is pregnate." He replied,

"THanks."
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