The Random Vampire Story [2]

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Colt--

Colt remembered that he always needed to be a gentle men. He breathed in, he couldn't smell her. When had he become human again. He would need to ask Brent later.


Jason--

"It's to quiet." Slade said to the other two. Jason nodded and rammed his shoudler into the door knocking it in.

"She's gone!" He gasped, they all ran for the door. THey ahd to find her before she hurt herself or the baby.
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Caiden

She had just made it around the corner when Jason, Brent and Slade found her. She wasn't going to go back, not without colt and she said so too.

"Caiden, you're going to hurt yourself!" Brent said.

"So?" She snapped. Slade sighed exasperatingly and lifted her up over his shoulder. "Hey!" she shouted. "Put me down!"

"Not until we get back."

She gave up.

Adriana

She really didn't like how he watched her. It was creepy, like a stalker finally getting the courage to speak to the one he was stalking.
I just lost the game.




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Colt--

Colt looked at her and frowned, she looked scared.

"If you don't want me to walk you home I wont." He said gently. "I promise, just say the word."


Jason--

Jason wasn't liking this one little bit. Why was she still wanting him?

He's the father of her child you idiot!!!!
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Caiden

She gave up and let them sit her on the couch, my arms crossed, face nearly blank. The only emotion put there was the hint of dispair and sadness. She wanted to die.

Brent

Caiden looked like she had just shut down, she didn't even look like she was breathing. He was worried about her. They had to be able to do something.

Adriana

"You're just...looking at me weird." She said.

"I'm sorry...you just look so familiar."

She made a turn a couple blocks early, she needed to go to the store. She wanted oreos.
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Colt--

Colt made it a habit to not look at her unless he had to. He didn't want to scare her, he ran his free hand through his hair and looked down at her. "If I'm not mistaken we're heading for the store."

"Yes." She replied,

"Oh." He said smiling a little. Inside he felt bad, she probably thought that he was a stalker or something. He didn't know how he was supposed to gain her trust.


Jason---

"Listen, Caiden, if you don't take care of yourself, then the baby will die and there is no way that Colt will ever member you if you let it die. Maybe that will be the key. Just hang on, please." Slade said, Jason wanted to hit him. Let the baby die, then save Caiden. That was all he wanted. That way he would be able to sway her his way.
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Caiden

Tears spilled over her eyes. "He won't remember, he doesn't want to." She curled over on her side, into Jason and cried.


Adriana

They walked a little longer. Adri started crossing the street and Colt suddenly pulled her back. She gasped and fell into his arms. Then watched as a car sped by right where she was.

"wow...thank you."
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Colt--

"You would've done the same." He smiled helping her stand up again,. He walked across the street with her and opened the door for the store for her.


Jason--

Jason stroked her hair and didn't look up at the other two guys. They would probably be boring holes into him. He didn't care, she was coming to him.
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Adriana

She would've tried to pull him out of the way, but face it, she wasn't strong enough. Anybody would. A stranger would for crying out loud! But she couldn't deny that he was handsome.


Caiden

She sat there, curled into a little ball and crying. The only comfort in the world that existed at the moment was Jason stroking her hair. She could sit there for days, she would have tired too. If they hadn't decided to try to get her to eat.

Brent

He wanted to rip Jason's throat out. Yes he was comforting Caiden and hopefully making it easier to get her to eat something. But he was taking advantage of the situation. He didn't do anything though, when everything was right with Colt, he'd do it himself. Brent was sure of it.

"Come on Caiden," he begged, "eat something."

She shook her head, "I'm not hungry."
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Jason---


"Please," Jason said stroking her hair, "You need to eat something."


Colt--

Colt grabbed a carry basket, "I'll carry your stuff." He smiled.
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Adriana

I gave him a shy smile. He really was charming. Maybe I should learn more about him..."How old are you?" She asked first.

Caiden

"I'm not hungry," she insisted.

"It's been two days since you've eaten anything," Slade said taking her hand. "Please, if not for yourself then for me?"

"That's mean," she said. "You know I'd do almost anything for you."
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Jason---

"THen eat." SLade said firmly putting some food in front of her. "For me."


Colt--


"TWenty." Colt smiled, "And you?" They walked down an aisle and she got a bag of oreos. They kept wakling looking for whatever she wanted.
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Adriana

"I just turned twenty." I grabbed a few more junk food things and went to the farmers market part. The one that sold fruits and such. I had a weakness for apples and strawberries.


Caiden

Slowly she sat up sighing, "fine. I'll eat something." Woosh! Suddenly there was a huge plate of food in front of her face. The smell of it made her want to puke at the same time it made her want to forget all utencils and tear into it.

The neausiousness of it made me remember.

"Thank you," Colt said patting her head.
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**Not Colt :P ***


Jason--

Jason looked at Slade then Caidne, she was eating thank goodness.


*sorry nothing*


Colt--

COlt nodded and helped her get the fruit. "So why do you like these fruits so much?" He asked smiling.
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I meant Slade =P You know what I meant!

Adriana

I giggled, "I have absoloutely no idea, I just do."

He laughed and pinched a grape off the grape thing. I laughed even harder. He was way too appealing for his own good.


Caiden

The food held no taste, no satisfaction. Only the bitter feeling that I would live to see the next day. I didn't like it. But they all watched her like a hawk.
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Colt--


Colt popped a grape in his mouth and looked at her. Her laugh was so sweet.

"Am I really that amuzing?" He laughed,


Jason---


Jason was glad she was eating though it didn't look like she was enjoying it.

In time, darlin, In time you'll learn to forget him. And even if I have to deal with that baby myself to help you I will.
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